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Work : Babyshower 4

By Sone  
Taken on the made up table of the babyshower. Just playing with whatbi had to work with.

Tags: General Flowers and plants

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banehawi Plus
11 1.4k 3422 Canada
30 Jun 2013 4:54PM
I would blend the brighter look of the earlier shots with this. Its looks "heavy" with the flowers quite dark.

Ending the frame at the top before the edge of the table can work, as it coincides with a break in the flowers. Ypu can restrict the flowers inside the frame with a little cloning on the left.

Its a good mono candidate too I think.


Loaded two mods for some ideas.



regards



Willie

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mrswoolybill Plus
9 902 1445 United Kingdom
1 Jul 2013 3:43PM
I like the colour balance of magenta and steel grey, but the composition seems just a bit messy, cluttered. I'm going to look at a square crop from the lower part of the frame, just to reduce the number of things in the frame.
I want to lighten, brighten this a bit. Plus there's a blueish cast that I find slightly annoying, again I think eliminating it would give a simpler, cleaner image. Mod to follow...
Moira

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