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Worthing Pier

By lburstow
This photo was taken early morning to capture the glow of the sunrise colour against Worthing Pier.

Tags: General Sunrise Pier Worthing Landscape and travel

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fentiger Plus
15 916 23 England
1 Jun 2008 1:51PM
Nice pano composition. I would increase contrast with a curves adjustment. Increase saturation in the red and yellow channels. Apply more sharpening. Put a frame around it. See my mod.

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culturedcanvas 11 4.7k 59 United Kingdom
1 Jun 2008 2:50PM
For me theres a bit too much punch in the mod above and the framing looks a touch old fashioned ... the shot itself is ok but panos are difficult to compose at the best of times. this one lacks any real interest for me ... mainly because it is dark and doesnt show any real detali in the pier.

This type of image has to have plenty to look at or some element of human interest to make it zing. You could have made more of the reflections maybe by moving around to adjust the comp ... that certainly would have provided an added dimension ... alternatively using yourself as a model in the foreground ... maybe walking the dog, stood looking at the pier etc might help add interest ...

A good pano should link a number of elements together to leads the viewer along the shot and should provide enough detail to enjoy along that journey.

1 Jun 2008 8:33PM
Thanks for the feedback - I will certainly take input from both comments and try again soon.

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