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JennB 14 60 1 United Kingdom
28 Mar 2008 3:06PM
The pose is nice, the head on an angle works well, I tend to do that with my portraits(not that I'm an expert!). I'm presuming you used on camera flash, this can flatten the shapes a little. Try to use window light without flash or if you have a flash gun, bounce the flash off a cieling or wall to soften the light. Hope that helps!
Rainy 14 United States
28 Mar 2008 5:06PM
For the first time I think you did a wonderful job. Good composition. The lighting looks very natural to me. Good work.

Regards, Rainy Iannucci
banehawi Plus
17 2.5k 4268 Canada
29 Mar 2008 1:13AM
Its a nice attempt, and a nice model. The hand is awkwardly placed and tends to distract from a terrific face and eye contact, - could be an ad for rings!

Loaded some mods as suggestions, hope you both approve.

cameracat 17 8.6k 61 Norfolk Island
29 Mar 2008 8:01AM
A tad oversaturated perhaps, Other wise quite nice....!
Nettles 14 England
29 Mar 2008 8:37PM
Super eye contact, a lovely shot.
Slightly oversaturated, but still very nice.
dudler Plus
18 1.7k 1878 England
3 Apr 2008 10:31PM
Window light and less saturation would make this nice shot excellent. But well worth a click for the lovely face and expression!


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