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Zuoz

By Bernabedellamattia
A little town that I visit every year in a cloudy day after the snow.


Tags: Trip Snow Travel Town Switzerland Landscape and travel zuoz

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banehawi Plus
14 1.9k 3952 Canada
17 May 2018 12:53PM
A very interesting composition, - I think it works.


I reduces haze in the mod to show the mountain a bit better, and reduced a green colour cast, - and lifted shadows slightly.




Regards



Willie

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dudler Plus
15 739 1423 England
17 May 2018 4:26PM
Does the spire o nthe right need to be meticulously vertical? I think it's tilting a little.

Willie's colour balance is much mroe attractive thah the original.
Agree! thanks!
mrswoolybill Plus
12 1.3k 1979 United Kingdom
18 May 2018 5:03PM
I like this, it's quirky, it's about balancing subjects in space. I really wish there was a bit less distance between tree and spire though, for them to relate better to each other. I wonder whether it would have been possible to move further to the left, to achieve that? In mountains, very possibly not... Anyway, I tried to replicate the effect.

I also straightened the spire, to match the tree really, and did some very gentle dodging and burning.
Moira
Great mrswoolybill!!
paulbroad 11 123 1262 United Kingdom
19 May 2018 4:53PM
No, not for me. too cropped off with no compositional base. Two completely unrelated items sticking up into a scene with no support. not compositionally satisfying.

Paul

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