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NY fall

By Abdelrazek
handheld at central park, ny..will always be my favorit city

Tags: General Landscape and travel Wildlife and nature

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LynneJoyce Plus
7 20 99 United Kingdom
22 Nov 2011 7:00PM
Lovely, but those perpendiculars are out a bit, so I've posted a mod.

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paulbroad 8 113 1021 United Kingdom
22 Nov 2011 8:03PM
Quite impressive at first sight, but there is a definate lean to the left and you should have dealt with that. Not sure it is terribly sharp, but may be the size reduction.

Paul
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3426 Canada
22 Nov 2011 8:21PM
Its a lovely shot, and New York from Central Park its spectacular this time of year.

Theres a small amount of burn out in the building on the left that can be toned down, and its a little soft. You need to check the resized image before you upload it for sharpness after you saved it, - just open the new file, and apply a little sharpening as needed.

Lynns mod is very nice, - Ive loaded a different take on it, - reduced the blown highlight area, and re composed to get the edge of the lake close to a third, - by removing space at the bottom and adding some sky at the top. Straightened the lean, sharpened and uploaded.
The lean is simply something thats caused by the optics in a very wide lens, - and though it can ve straightened in software, it can also be left, - or you can use it for special effects such as sTaNding close to centre of a tall buiding and shooting straight up along its height, - can be a spectacular shot.


Hope this is helpful


regards



Willie

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