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Sailor

By adentenur
a pic of my friend when we travelling to Aceh, Indonesia. i saw this light after rain on a boat. and just shot it Smile

Tags: General Portraits and people Flash and lighting

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NDODS Plus
6 5.1k 125 United Kingdom
22 Apr 2012 8:50AM
Great image, love the silhouette and lens flare.

Regards Nathan

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adentenur 4 9 Indonesia
22 Apr 2012 8:56AM

Quote:Great image, love the silhouette and lens flare.

Regards Nathan



thanks NDODS Smile
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
22 Apr 2012 4:45PM
A lovely image with very nice light. I know this was a quick, spur of the moment shot, and your camera was set to f/2. You have good sharpness and outline in the lower area, closer to your camera, and a little softer where his head is, - so f/5.6 would have covered the whole range. But it still works. Ive sharpened the upper area as much as I could in the mod, and cropped a little space from the top. It places both his hand, and his head on a third, so looks good as a composition.


Well done,



regards



Willie
adentenur 4 9 Indonesia
22 Apr 2012 6:03PM

Quote:A lovely image with very nice light. I know this was a quick, spur of the moment shot, and your camera was set to f/2. You have good sharpness and outline in the lower area, closer to your camera, and a little softer where his head is, - so f/5.6 would have covered the whole range. But it still works. Ive sharpened the upper area as much as I could in the mod, and cropped a little space from the top. It places both his hand, and his head on a third, so looks good as a composition.


Well done,



regards



Willie


waw, thanks for the critique willie!
Smile
paulbroad 9 117 1077 United Kingdom
23 Apr 2012 8:42AM
A fine idea but you needed the sun behind his arm. That would have removed the flare and increased impact even more. Once the foreground shapes are black, they will get no blacker, so you could have reduced exposure further to fill sky detail.

Paul
Great shot .. Everything in the right place

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