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it was taken in a train near the window

Camera:Canon A610
Recording media:digital
Username:adrianl adrianl
Uploaded:18 Sep 2006 - 12:49 PM
Tags:Black & white, Portraits / people
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Skull  928 forum posts United Kingdom
18 Sep 2006 - 7:44 PM

You haven't mentioned where this shot was taken...is it in a car or boat??? The reason I ask is because the top left corner is really blown out and is quite distracting. Could you have placed yourself more in front of the model so you still had the light on her face, rather than in the frame.
I don't know if you have any imaging software, if so you could work on it from there.
Hope this helps.

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