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cameracat 17 8.6k 61 Norfolk Island
3 Jan 2009 6:17PM
Interesting image, But your subject looks too posed, Almost like a statue.....If you know what I mean, Also the strong highlight on the seat by the window are a major distraction from your subject...!

Lastly, There is just too much room in the scene....You could try cropping in closer to your subject.......This would add emphasis on the subject & remove the distractions around him.....Oh! And next time ask him to look towards you......NOT stare at you.....Smile Or maybe even smile.....!

Good luck.....Smile Have a vote for effort....!

Vince

EDIT: I should add, That a little fill flash or some light reflected onto your subject with a white board might help too........!
alzh 17 Saudi Arabia
3 Jan 2009 7:32PM
thanks cameracat see all my photo

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