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First photoshoot 1

By ambro
I attended a photography course recently, and we had a model available on the day. I've never photographed a model before, so these are my first attempts at proper 'people' photography. All comments welcome, please!

Tags: Modelling Model Street White Black Scene Girl Black and white Jacket Hood Mood Photoshoot Portraits and people

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.


NeilWigan Plus
6 13 15 England
17 Sep 2010 11:20PM
lovely girl very well shot.i am not experienced enough to critique ,but it looks good to me.

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Philo Plus
6 99 83 England
18 Sep 2010 8:14AM
Hi Victor, I've never done a photoshoot but this looks quite good to me and I like the mono conversion. The highlight on her nose is a bit distracting and could maybe do with toning down a little. When I first viewed it I liked the zippers and black & white hooped top but then my eye kept getting drawn to it. I therefore decided to have a go at a mod to remove it. Not sure it is an improvement but does provide an alternative to consider.
diver pete 12 71 1 New Zealand
18 Sep 2010 8:31AM
An excellent image. Looking forward to seeing some more of your work.

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