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jeanie Plus
12 6.0k 6 United Kingdom
1 Aug 2005 2:26PM
She is growing up SO fast!!! Beautiful image, K, with super colours.
Jeanie

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patters 11 1.8k 1 United Kingdom
1 Aug 2005 2:41PM
colours are nice, pose looks a little awkward
Pete Plus
14 18.8k 96 England
1 Aug 2005 2:42PM
I think this is one of your best yet!
shutter speed 11 369 United Kingdom
1 Aug 2005 2:51PM
Great photography little nit pick on my part is the(Her) right eye looks a bit odd slight change in angle to lose it?? Y/n
Just a thought.
icafe 12 19 Canada
1 Aug 2005 3:00PM
Excellent colours, pose and composition.
Arthur Smile
tull 12 181 United Kingdom
1 Aug 2005 3:21PM
Congratulations on a well deserved EC K.

Mark.
shitzkit 11 147
1 Aug 2005 3:49PM
fantastic shot
Saderi 11 2 1 Malaysia
1 Aug 2005 3:55PM
Congrats
Saiful
sun yin 11
1 Aug 2005 3:58PM
Beautiful colour
Ceciliat 11 6 Philippines
1 Aug 2005 4:30PM
You have handled the exposure well and the close composition is effective.
Well done.
Congrats....
Cesie
Nic_WA 11 179 2 Australia
1 Aug 2005 5:51PM
Great colours - a very fresh image K. Well done on your EC Smile
Nic
suleesia 11 176 Malaysia
1 Aug 2005 7:46PM
The kind of work I wish I could do! Congrats!
p/s you missed a spot, see 'mods' Smile
C_Daniels Plus
11 399 10 England
1 Aug 2005 8:21PM
Interesting - like the colour and feel of the picture!
tigerminx 11 237 South Africa
1 Aug 2005 10:33PM
First class stuff K. Love the pose, lighting and presentation. Congrats.
Bruce.
phiggy 14 6 United Kingdom
1 Aug 2005 10:43PM
Excellent !
Congratulation on your E.C.
Well deserved Smile
Phil
sandyb 11 34 United Kingdom
1 Aug 2005 11:55PM
superb. well done. well deserved EC congrats to you sandyb
kit-monster 12 3.7k 2 Singapore
2 Aug 2005 12:28AM
Very unusual but stricking composition.

Edward
2 Aug 2005 12:44AM
Blimey an EC, thanks Pete! And thanks to all for comments and for the mod, that will teach me to edit late at night again. K.
mr g 11 403 3 United Kingdom
2 Aug 2005 1:20AM
Impressive portrait. Great colours and well presented
Rob
funkeldink Plus
12 1.6k 1 United Kingdom
2 Aug 2005 1:24AM
gonna do a mod .... congrats ....one question/// who's trying to nick the pear??
funkeldink Plus
12 1.6k 1 United Kingdom
2 Aug 2005 1:40AM
okey dokey ..hope you like the mod
2 Aug 2005 1:47AM
Thanks Rob and Fred, and Fred for the mod, funnily enough I did start off with just a hand and pear, I have a few of these so might do one more, thanks again for taking the time to mod and comment everyone. K.
starstriders 11 1.6k United Kingdom
2 Aug 2005 3:41AM
I do like this but I don't think it's one of your best K. I find her very white face is competing for attention with the pear. I'm not sure about the angle of the face either - there's too much "whites of the eyes" for me, they look a bit like they're rolling back...no offence meant to Alex there!

Love the streaky hair though - v v cool. Smile
2 Aug 2005 3:42AM
Thanks Lauren, I agree it needs a bit more work, missed a few bits in the background. I had one done and then lost it so had to start again, should have spent a bit more time on it but I liked it. Alex does have big eyes so thats probably why it looks as it does, but this is a completely natural shot, her idea too. I tried colouring the pear but it looked odd so went with the natural pear, contrasting against the manipulated face. I'm trying some offbeat stuff, getting away from the standard portraits, have others I want to try and other ideas too, thanks for the comment much appreciated. k.
Pete Plus
14 18.8k 96 England
2 Aug 2005 3:49AM
That's what I like about it...the very natural pear and its contrast against the almost whitewashed face. Each to their own though Smile
UserRemoved 12 4.2k
2 Aug 2005 5:22AM
Nope dont like it.

Looking out of frame is juxtaposed by the pear but I keep thinking - WTF?

Far too busy - the 'bangles' or whatever they are called these days detract from the image - again all IMHO.

What is that on the RHS against the black background? and why the gap in the first place.

Its colourful all right but I just dont get it - sorry.

Definitely not one of your best. Again IMHO.
2 Aug 2005 5:26AM
Thanks for the comment Joe. K.
heatherb 11 23 United Kingdom
2 Aug 2005 6:45AM
perfect
heather
philjoel 12 26 1
2 Aug 2005 7:06AM
Whilst this is not my particular cup of tea (I am very traditional in my photograph likes) I can see artistry in the work of others.

I think this is a wonderfully artistic photograph and has excellent imagination. The pose is unusual but good, though I think the shoulder could look a little more relaxed.

In terms of "off beat" stuff - this is great. It must be very liberating, examining this side of photography. Well done and I look forward to seeing it.

(Man - that all sounds SO pretentious but it isn't meant to be. I just meant - it's artistic and good for it. Looking forward to the rest)
2 Aug 2005 7:15AM
Thank you Phil Smile K.
evelen 11 5 England
2 Aug 2005 10:04AM
beautiful portrait and detail is fantastic.
eve.
PatrickSmith 11 1.2k 2 United States
2 Aug 2005 10:16AM
LOL - I think you are spoiled, having such a photogenic subject in your house. I think you need to get out into the mud, salt, and bugs with the rest of us!
Patrick
Atlas 12 621 United Kingdom
2 Aug 2005 10:34AM
I must say this far from perfect K and looks very rushed and unfinished, as you have already admitted. I can usually find many little imperfections in a lot of your work, mainly just background untidiness.
This has quite a few things I could point out, such as between the upper lip and the septum looks odd because it blends with her cheek due to the high key style you have chosen, also the colour streaks go over the forehead and on the neck, the top of her hair has a harsh lighting patch making it look dry , her right arm and bangle is also harshly lit, and lastly there is a lot of untidy hair in front of her face. Other than that it looks fine :o) hope ya find my comments helpful K, and I've done you a mod with some of the things corrected that I felt let it down slightly ☼☼☼☼☼

Rob
2 Aug 2005 10:56AM
Thanks for the mod Rob, yes, never noticed the cheek before, I'm viewing this on another monitor at the moment and can see the bits you've pointed out, I usually add a curves adjustment layer to anything I do with my present monitor, but I didnt this time. Thanks everyone for the honest feedback, its nice to see. Also all those secret clickers, thanks too. K.
ejtumman 11 2.8k England
2 Aug 2005 12:35PM
I like the composition, but....

.....The background is messy and whats with the pink splodge on the end of her nose?

Keep them coming though...

Emma ;o)
keithh Plus
12 24.8k 33 Wallis And Futuna
2 Aug 2005 12:42PM
I like the pear, the pose, the five coloured hair, the idea, but that BG is a bit messy.
Wink
ah what the heck...can't see it on the 500pix version.
Smile
2 Aug 2005 12:44PM
Thanks for the comments folks, much appreciated. K.
User_Removed 13 39 6 Scotland
3 Aug 2005 12:15AM
Morning K, first time in a long while I can take some time for a good look around. Problem with kids is that you dfo not see them for a few months and bam! they grow up again. Turning into such a little beauty, just like her mum!!.
Luv the 60,s feel to this. Sure, others have commented on this and that but the overall felling is rather peaceful and trippy in an old hippy fashion.
Hope you and the family are well.

Luv Victor x
User_Removed 13 39 6 Scotland
3 Aug 2005 12:15AM
Morning K, first time in a long while I can take some time for a good look around. Problem with kids is that you do not see them for a few months and bam! they grow up again. Turning into such a little beauty, just like her mum!!.
Luv the 60,s feel to this. Sure, others have commented on this and that but the overall felling is rather peaceful and trippy in an old hippy fashion.
Hope you and the family are well.

Luv Victor x
3 Aug 2005 12:51AM
Hi Victor! Nice to see you back again. Thanks for your comment, much appreciated. Glad you get it Smile K.
3 Aug 2005 1:49AM
this is really beautiful captured.. love the pose.. and play o flight through the hair..
you truly have a beautiful gallery..Smile thank you for your lovely comments on my compositions.. hugs have a wonderful daySmile

nikki
covey 11 1.7k Ireland
3 Aug 2005 2:58AM
To be honest the imperfections mentioned don't bother me much.

I find the eyes unflattering ( what makes a lot of the other pictures of your daughter) and the phot overcontrived. Just my view!.

BTW think the bangles add something.

T.
3 Aug 2005 4:15AM
Thank you both for your comments and thoughts, much appreciated. K.
KathyW 12 1.8k 12 Norfolk Island
3 Aug 2005 7:46AM
Congrats on the EC.
Unusual shot, I lke the hippy feel.
Agree it would have been even better had she turned a little more to the right.
Dinda 11 90 United Kingdom
3 Aug 2005 12:06PM
This is great K, and congrats on the EC! Only slight crit (and it's not really that) is her face seems a bit flat, particularly when contrasted with the great highlights in her hair. Are they real - and if so was there a 'discussion' around hair dyes ;o)
3 Aug 2005 12:57PM
Wonderful Eastern feel to the shot. Nice work.
3 Aug 2005 2:07PM
Thanks very much everyone for all the comments and suggestions. Georgina, no discussion, no need, I painted it on in PS Wink K.
Dinda 11 90 United Kingdom
6 Aug 2005 11:11AM
Ooops, just revisited and realised I actually forgot to click (have done so now) - easy to do when you get carried away with commenting lol. Sorry K! Oh and interesting to hear you put the highlights in her hair (another few years...... )
8 Aug 2005 8:09AM
lol! No worries. K.
PeeGee 11 10
11 Aug 2005 1:46AM
I really don't get this one. Awkward pose and a pear...?!?!?

I do like alot of your stuff though!

PG.
Consulo Plus
11 836 10 Scotland
11 Aug 2005 10:51AM
There are perhaps one or two minor background oversights, but I think that some of the comments have been a little on the harsh side (though I respect peoples right to their opinions).

I think this is a wonderfully "provocative" image in that it challenges much of potraitures rules. And as some of the comments on this photo have proven, good art provokes disagreement and discussion.

Big click from me. Smile
12 Aug 2005 2:07AM
Thank you very much Smile) K.

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