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Coast 14 1.6k 292 United Kingdom
22 Feb 2014 10:51PM
Have you tried a tighter crop on this? Coming in at the sides closer to the edge of the hands and moving the bottom of the frame to the V point of the open shirt. Losing the chair and elbows.

Makes for a more sensual and intense image.

The expression is captivating and beautiful eyes. Execution of lighting is good although I would want to lose the triple highlights in the eyes to one. This is a quality portrait nonetheless.

Paul
23 Feb 2014 8:30PM
Hi thanks for the comment, I tried your suggestions and it certainly improved the image.
Tony

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