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At Demonstration 2

By arhab
Still the picture of burning tire at demonstration. This one I hope better than my upload before, because the background on here included demonstran and there are banner too, so the nuance is out.

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.


pamelajean Plus
11 1.0k 1952 United Kingdom
3 May 2012 11:39PM
This is a lot better, Muhamad, very much like the picture that I was suggesting when commenting on your last upload.
I think the image might benefit from a crop to the right side, almost up to the red podium. The smoke is covering most of the action on that side, and the crop would keep the people who are not covered by smoke on the right, showing what is happening and balancing the image better.
Also, I would have preferred it if you had raised your camera little at the time of shooting, so that there was a bit of space above the heads of those people on the podium. You would still have had plenty of space at the bottom.

I have responded to your recent forum topic about the Critique Gallery.
I hope you understand my explanation.


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arhab 5 43 2 Indonesia
4 May 2012 1:50PM
Thank you Pam, yes I understand your explaination

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