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By arhab
I want to enter photo competition that presented by powerhouse museum Sydney Australia on mobilephones category. The deadline is 29 june 2012. So still there is time if you want too.

The judging are on composition, technique, content, creativity, and experimental approach. The image composition is ok, i guess. But i'm not sure about the others. So any comment and critique welcome. and any any idea for the title.... Smile thank you inadvance...

And the reason i change to black and white because the colour is dull and i thing it will give more impact in black and white.

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paulbroad 10 123 1244 United Kingdom
3 Jun 2012 9:07AM
Reasonable quality from a phone, but a little too contrasty. The content does nothing for me at all I fear - composition is OK, but the main subject is a post with a number on it. I think colour might be better.


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arhab 6 43 2 Indonesia
3 Jun 2012 10:56AM
i guess you are right about the content Paul. truely i am difficult to find interesting subject. the competition itself about train, well thank you for your comment. i will find another subject.
banehawi Plus
13 1.8k 3881 Canada
3 Jun 2012 4:49PM
The title should be "Mile 9"

pamelajean Plus
12 1.1k 2016 United Kingdom
3 Jun 2012 5:21PM
Is this railway line in use, Muhamad?
If so, you could wait for a train to come by and use the rails as a lead-in.
You say the competition is about trains and, if the line is not in use, perhaps you could reconsider your composition so that you don't include so many rocks and grass. You could use the line to run from the bottom of your frame into the distance.
Whatever the white thing is on the far side of the track, it is doing nothing for your image.
I do, however, think you have used the numbered post to good effect and, in the absence of any other interesting main element, it will probably have to do.
arhab 6 43 2 Indonesia
5 Jun 2012 7:21PM
@willie: you are right. but i prefer to use "Km 9" than "Miles 9" because we in indonesia not using miles except in the sea.
arhab 6 43 2 Indonesia
5 Jun 2012 7:26PM
@pam: the track still in use. this the main track in java, Pam. i will try to include the train. and thank you for all your comment Smile

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