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Starting The Day

By arhab
Taken early morning. Do you think the composition is good? i had other version with more sky and less ricefield. But i prefer this one because not much anything in the sky. Thank you,

Tags: Landscape and travel

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manicam 12 Canada
30 Mar 2013 3:40AM
Beautiful, nice job.

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30 Mar 2013 5:13AM
Very nice comp, well captured !
Chen
Mike43 5 17 21 England
30 Mar 2013 8:18AM
Have uploaded a mod where I have cropped a small area of the foreground which I feel gives it a better balance, also added a little warmth to the scene. Apart from that you have a great composition with the Paddy Fields and the sun, but the actual quality of the photograph lets it down which is a shame because the idea, composition, and the overall contend of the shot is good.
Mike.
chase Plus
11 1.1k 246 England
30 Mar 2013 8:34AM
A nice mod from Mike,the warmer colours are much more appealing.
I think you could go even further with a crop taking much more from the bottom to give this a panoramic feel/letterbox composition....it would get rid of that red blotch too.
I love the way you have captured the people walking into the frame.The bg actually appeals ,a pretty misty feel to that which is what makes the image for me.
Mike43 5 17 21 England
30 Mar 2013 10:31AM

Quote:A nice mod from Mike,the warmer colours are much more appealing.
I think you could go even further with a crop taking much more from the bottom to give this a panoramic feel/letterbox composition....it would get rid of that red blotch too.
I love the way you have captured the people walking into the frame.The bg actually appeals ,a pretty misty feel to that which is what makes the image for me.



Its funny I never noticed the red spot till you said must be going blind, but you are right it needs to be taken out.
Mike.
arhab 4 43 2 Indonesia
30 Mar 2013 11:05AM
the red spot is reflection from the sun. actually i was thinking to remove it but then i decided to leave it. thank you all for the comment and for the mod too. it is nice to read other opinion, that' s why i love this crit gallery.
widtink 4 406 2 Scotland
30 Mar 2013 12:33PM
Well done I think your composition is fantastic and the misty atmosphere is lovely Smile

Rod
mrswoolybill Plus
9 949 1479 United Kingdom
30 Mar 2013 12:38PM
Full marks for spotting the potential in this subject, and timing it very nicely to have the figures walking along that ridge below the sun. And by the way I spotted the sun's reflection in the wet field and knew immediately what it was.
The light is subtle, subdued, but a bit flat. Mike's Mod gives a better sense of clarity without losing the delicacy and mystery.
This scene really is nearly a blank canvas, for you to create your own composition from. For my eye there's too much on the right side of the frame, too little on the left to balance it. I would probably go for portrait, to create a direct visual link from the foreground rice plants up to the workmen and then up into the sky. Will have a go at a Mod.
Michael Freeman's wonderful book The Photographer's Eye includes a double page spread devoted to a very similar scene, a rice farmer in a vast paddy field, and he demonstrates how it can be used to create no fewer than nine different compositions, using different placement, format, proportions. And he doesn't even mention square images, which would be high on my list!
Moira
mrswoolybill Plus
9 949 1479 United Kingdom
30 Mar 2013 12:58PM
OK Six Mods uploaded, which is a record for me but they are simply variations on a theme.
I adjusted in Levels, and added a bit of brightness and contrast, I hope I didn't overdo it. Then I tried out three different crops, one portrait and two square, and I've also shown the effect of flipping each one horizontally so that the figures are walking towards the right, which is how a lot of people want to see movement heading.
We read progress, narrative, from left to right, at least we do here in the west. The right is where we are heading, the next stop on the line, the future.
Your figures are walking to the left, so towards the past, memories. I much prefer that, and it gives the right atmosphere here, rather tired, the end of a long day.
The flipped Mods are simply to show how the mood changes with the direction of movement.
Moira
widtink 4 406 2 Scotland
30 Mar 2013 2:56PM
Very interesting Moira thanks for another lesson Smile

Rod
Niknut Plus
6 1.2k 68 United Kingdom
30 Mar 2013 5:17PM
Fine shot !!.....lovely composition, which works well for me, with nice warm colours !!!!!
arhab 4 43 2 Indonesia
30 Mar 2013 6:04PM
wow.... a lot of mod, it's nice to see you all offering the mod. that's really open my mind to see with different perspective. i really like the square format from Moira... i think i must try too. thank you all.
paulbroad 9 114 1048 United Kingdom
31 Mar 2013 4:54PM
Very nice indeed. I would crop the foreground to a nearer letterbox and leave it at that. It's a touch distracting as is, but a fine well exposed image.

Paul

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