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The Clouds

By arhab
I feel now, I started tune changes the colour manually. Moving the slider... and I feel addicted. I saw some good clouds from willie and the other. But for beginner like me, what i have done here is amzing. Unedit image, i put in the mod.

Tags: Landscape and travel

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16 Mar 2012 12:07PM
It is a nice try and good cloud formations can create striking images themselves without any other subject matter.

I personally prefer the original the unedited version, I think if you played around with curves and brigthness/contrast, you could have acheived a better effect without the halo around the trees.

Good effort though, keep it up and enjoy experimenting, it is the best way to improve and learn.

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pamelajean Plus
10 958 1818 United Kingdom
17 Mar 2012 7:15PM
You seem very happy to have manipulated the cloud picture, Muhamad, and it's good to see you having a go. It can be a lot of fun watching your pictures change and improve.
As Simon says, there is a halo around the trees, and you have also produced a dark area at the top.
I think you have also used a touch too much contrast.
Stay with simple adjustments while you are learning, such as saturation, brightness/contrast, levels or curves. Play with the settings until you achieve the desired effect.
The tree is a strong silhouette against the sky, and the clouds have interesting formations.
I have done a modification where I used saturation and levels.
Pamela.
arhab 4 43 2 Indonesia
20 Mar 2012 4:55AM
Thank u Simon,Pam. Yes, you are right. I will stay with simple adjustments while I am learning. The dark area in the top because I add vignette filter.

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