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    Quote:First off, congratulations for everything that has gone right here. You are looking beyond the obvious, homing in on strong features. This is a mesmerising image, it totally demands attention. And the eye is piercingly sharp, that matters.

    Various thoughts:

    Just because the lens offers F2.8, that doesn't mean that it's compulsory or even advisable to use it. I would feel happier with a little smaller, just to bring a bit more of the scarf into focus. The area under the eye is fairly sharp, that helps. But I do feel that there's an awful lot of blur immediately in front of my eye, albeit on the periphery, and that's awkward. A bit like holding your hand up to you eye and then trying to focus beyond it.

    I love a good square crop, it gives an enclosed, private feel. But this doesn't quite work for me, there's too much space for the soft nose and brow on the right. Like the first modification I cropped at the sides - I placed the centre of the pupil on the upper right third, which seems better balanced to me.

    Third thought - why the choice of a yellow scarf of all colours, I wonder? After orange and lime green it's probably the least flattering colour for skin tones, even when there's auburn hair involved! I opted for b&w to get rid of it, darkening somewhat on the yellow channel to give it a bit more substance.
    Moira


    Dear Moira
    First of all you have all my respect beacuse you got me your time to upgrade my work
    Secondly about your crops i had done this before and with ur crop i got the correct frame
    Tnx tnx tnx tnx
    Regards Rolan
    • 14 Dec 2017 5:51PM
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    Dear firends and photographers
    As you asked me i will upload my mod as soon as possible . Wink
    I really love the way you care about art and photography

    Best regards
    Rolan
    • 30 Nov 2017 3:14PM
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    Quote:Nice to see the entire model.


    dear Willie
    i think you lcd brightness and saturation is completely different with mine .

    regards

    Willie

    • 17 Aug 2015 12:23AM
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    tnx alottttttttttt for your constructive critics people Smile
    • 12 Aug 2015 12:09PM
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    Dear Willie
    thank you so much , i agree with you completely
    i m really thankful for your Persian word
    • 28 Jan 2013 5:18PM
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    try this photo in mono theme

    ARTRBN
    • 1 Jan 2013 1:16PM
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    a photo can say a thousand words Wink
    • 28 Dec 2012 7:58PM
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  • I really love the way you use FORMs and CURVEs
    your Fotos can be on the wall of every houses , every one can enjoy a warm and a peaceful atmosphere with take a look over the wall Wink

    Regards

    ARTRBN
    • Posted on NEWMANP's profile
    • 23 Dec 2012 8:49PM