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By artrbn
archaic area of old structures of Yazd city which is located in center of Iran , expressing power and static of past architectures .

Tags: Architecture Landscape and travel

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Rock Plus
14 10 2 England
24 Dec 2012 9:07PM
Wonderful viewpoint.


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Alda Plus
4 70 30 United Kingdom
25 Dec 2012 12:52AM
I thought it was a prison! Great shot Smile
paulbroad 9 116 1064 United Kingdom
25 Dec 2012 8:36AM
Would like exposure details, but otherwise this is a fine strong image. Very great immediate impact. There is some grain, so I suspect a high ISO.

pamelajean Plus
10 969 1832 United Kingdom
26 Dec 2012 1:43PM
I like the way you have composed this, Rooby, with the small tower in the centre of the walls of the surrounding buildings. You have kept good colour in the sky, the tower has good light upon it, and the contrasts of light and shade add impact to the image.
In a composition like this, having the tower central in the frame works well, but you do need perfect symmetry, and the tower is just a bit short of being central.
The only thing that spoils it for me is the messy road, or ground. I appreciate that this is an old part of the city and that it is probably quite neglected, and so the state of the ground also suggests that neglect. However, I have tidied it up a bit in my modification. I also cropped quite a bit of it away, centralized the tower, adjusted levels and sharpened. I removed the noise from the sky with the Soften Brush in PaintshopPro.
artrbn 3 Iran, Islamic Republic Of
26 Dec 2012 8:12PM
dear pamelaje

i love your modification but just in terms of editing . in my idea this shot has two point , door and tower . the area you deleted is an important part of shot to arrive to door point, finally i really thankful for your special look on my photo

Best regards


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