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By avfcmark  
A picture i took in Derbyshire, made a vibrance change in photoshop

Tags: Landscape and travel

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ade_mcfade 18 15.2k 216 England
3 Jun 2010 3:02PM
like the inclusion of the people and the flowing lines of the path elading you through the shot - but that foreground grass bottom right - a little dominant maybe?
3 Jun 2010 3:13PM
I agree, thats the bit i`m not keen on myself!!..
botsibi 12 1 Canada
3 Jun 2010 5:04PM
Outstanding composition and framing with vivid colouring.
paulbroad Plus
15 131 1294 United Kingdom
3 Jun 2010 5:35PM
Potential a nice composition - I assume you upped the vibrance. Pity. It is very, very green. I would have preferred things rather lress vibrant - more natural.

pamelajean Plus
16 1.8k 2264 United Kingdom
4 Jun 2010 2:22PM
Hello, Mark. Frank set the challenge, so I have taken it up and have done a modification that eliminates the foliage bottom right. I also cropped the bottom a little, reduced the saturation, and did a little dodging and burning to give a bit more contrast.
4 Jun 2010 3:32PM
Smile, fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Seamuscamp 13 3 10 United Kingdom
5 Jun 2010 10:47PM
I think PJ has it right in desaturating; but I can't applaud the massive reconstruction (though it makes it a better photo. I think this is a case where less is more. Taking Ade's comment as a starting point, and agreeing about the over-dominance of the foliage, a radical crop seems rational. A better result, of course, at the original resolution; and with PJ's improved light levels.

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