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banehawi

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  • Korean Style

    It is a very nice shot.

    I uploaded a modification thats a little sharper, rotated slightly, and has less Magenta. Click the blue Modification button under the image, then click of the number 1 to see it.


    Regards



    Willie
    • 7 Dec 2016 4:38PM
  • Hall of Fame

    Could be Hall of Frame too.
    • 7 Dec 2016 2:25PM
  • Down to menswear.....

    Its quite a nice shot for a slow shutter.

    I would be inclined to try and get that centre "eye" in the centre of the image, but its best done when shooting.

    Ive tried this in the mod, which is a bit sharpener and darker, but it crops off the handrail in the right side, which works well in the original.


    I think Wren and others took a lot of inspiration from nature, and this quality may have been part of his own DNA!


    W
    • 7 Dec 2016 2:23PM
  • snowdonia sunset before the storm

    I agree with the above.

    I tried a mod, cropped to 16X9 and tweaked colour, exposure and contrast.

    To tone down the Sun, I copied an area of existing cloud and placed it on the Sun, and adjusted opacity. I didnt spend a long time on it, so it can be done better with some more time, and this is to show what a less intense Sun could loook like.


    Regards



    Willie
    • 7 Dec 2016 1:57PM
  • my angel from heaven

    Its very good. For us, its so good to see someone responding to feedback and improving, so well done.

    I would suggest modest alterations: her upper hand, placed side-on, is moving in the right direction, but to me looks a little too "posed"; Im not sure its touching her other hand, so I think thats draws my attention. So less cupped, on the other hand, and try no to block the bottom of her chin, she could rest her chin on the hand. It may be more comfortable for her if you used a pillow to support her hands and head, which will also make her head more vertical.

    Since theres a bright light behind her also, the metering has been affected so that her face if a little underexposed; this is something to be aware of as you manually expose, get the meter pointer more to the right, so its about +2/3.

    You could use that flash, mounted on a stand, and shoot through a brolly diffuser, placed to camera left at 45 degrees, and at 45 degrees high from level, try a few shots with different flash power settings. In this case you can also adjust the exposure back to centre, or jot as the images dictates.


    I uploaded a mod with some more light on her face.


    Question, are you shooting in RAW or JPEG?


    Regards



    Willie
    • 6 Dec 2016 6:52PM
  • Foggy doggy

    The original has more potential I think.
    • 6 Dec 2016 2:46PM
  • Is Dinner Ready?

    Good detail in that target bird.

    Exif notes aperture as f/6.4.

    Did you shoot RAW or is this jpeg from camera?
    • 6 Dec 2016 2:35PM
  • Some nice work, - youve a good eye for a shot


    W
  • Lots of really good shots in this portfolio, - many deserving of much more acknowledgment than theyre getting.



    W
  • A superb set of images showing a real connection with the subjects in many cases. A master class in the art of b&w.


    Willie
  • Nice range of very good shots, especially the portraits


    W
  • Love your pf, - you have a terrific eye for a shot.

    W
    • Posted on Strobe's profile
    • 20 Jul 2008 3:21AM
  • Moira, I just LOVE the Dublin series, - as a part Irish person you will understand how your journey, so well documented in this series really resonates with a person born and raised there, as I am.

    Regards

    Willie
  • Beautiful set of landscapes, well done.

    W
  • I like your new PF pic Vic.

    W
  • Very nice portfolio


    W
    • Posted on NikkiW's profile
    • 7 May 2008 8:43PM
  • You have a very nice portfolio, - Im inspired to take better shots around Toronto!

    Added you to my favourites.

    Regards

    Willie