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Clouds descending the slopes of the mountain

By BarbroS
View from a narrow village alley in rural Spain.
I tried to capture the quaint charm of my village, and the feeling of invading humidity in this usually very sunny region.

Tags: Village Houses Alley Landscape and travel Orchards

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mrswoolybill Plus
9 838 1368 United Kingdom
28 Apr 2013 3:25PM
Very thoughtful, engaging composition - carving the picture out of the available view. I like the way those neat verticals on either side channel our eyes towards the distance. It all sits very tidily in your square crop.
Your relatively large aperture has worked well in isolating the foreground sharply against the background (the buildings stand out nicely against the hillside, and particularly that trailing creeper and the lantern against the evergreens), avoiding what could easily be a more confusing mixture.
The bit that doesn't work for me is the angled down-pipe and guttering top right - that drags the eye back up again, away from the clouds, and makes the composition top-heavy. I would have preferred to tilt the camera downwards a bit, less at the top, more at the bottom. I shall have a go at a Mod to demonstrate.
Moira

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Thanks a lot taking the trouble to analyze this photo! And for the encouraging part of your comments. I easily see your point in disliking that drainpipe at the top - I actually thought about trying to straighten it in PS Elements, but then did not feel bold enough ... I had already struggled to remove a thick black el-cable crossing the street. Strangely, in your version, though defnitely cleaner, I seem to miss something - could it be that I unconsciously saw the houses forming a kind of incomplete archway? And the left side seems to weigh a lot now ... I am completely uneducated in these things, it's all feelings. So I am immensely grateful for your advice !
mrswoolybill Plus
9 838 1368 United Kingdom
28 Apr 2013 4:23PM
I wondered about the arch - maybe a compromise and cut off the guttering? But then the dislocated bit of drainpipe goes nowhere... Life really is very unsatisfactory... Wink
Moira
Yes! Second modification feels just right Thank you Moira!

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