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Stormy weather on it's way!

By BarbroS
View from my bedroom window the other morning (rural Spain) Tried to capture the dramatic contrast in light - think I may have over-sharpened it in PP?

Tags: Mountain Stormy skies Landscape and travel

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TilG88 8 1 England
25 Apr 2013 6:23PM
Love this shot, Great light on the rocks and love the dark, Stormy clouds,
and not a bad view out a bedroom window Grin

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TilG88 8 1 England
25 Apr 2013 6:40PM
Didn't realise you have just joined, A great first upload,
The rocks do look a little bit over sharpened but I'm no expert Grin
chase Plus
11 1.1k 246 England
25 Apr 2013 7:55PM
Hi Barbara & welcome to ePz,I hope you enjoy your time with us.Nice to see you popping your first image in the Critique gallery for us to take a look at.
The light here is splendid,lovely mountain view & a good stormy-looking sky.Perhaps there is just a wee bit too much sky here which has overtaken those beautiful mountains.Maybe a hefty crop from the top would give more emphasis to the light & the mountains.
It does look a touch over sharpened but not drastically so,the compression needed for posting on here may not have helped tbh.
I have done a mod for you where I have cropped off the top of the sky,just altered the colour balance slightly & added a few birds,which I think helps break up the expanse of sky a little...shame there were none there on the day you took the original as I think something like the birds would have given you another element in the image & something to focus on too.
I think you did capture the contrast in the light & this is a super view from your window,one that could give you hours of photographic opportunities.

P.S. try to remember to convert your images to sRGB for posting on the web,it helps retain colour & detail.
25 Apr 2013 10:48PM
Thank you Chase for taking the trouble to look at my pic! I can see how your suggestions would improve the composition - and I would be thrilled to see the result of your proposed changes. How would that be possible? About the addition of birds, I normally try to reflect the world as it appears to me - not very creative, true. And in this case the particular light situation lasted but seconds, it was this shot or nothing, more or less.In any case, very much appreciate your comments, never had a chance to receive comments other than Flickr "wows", which encourage but do not help me progress... Will be back!
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
26 Apr 2013 4:37AM
Barbara, just scroll up this page and click the Modifications tab to see the changes done by Chase.


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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
26 Apr 2013 4:50AM
Welcome to EPZ.

This is quite a sight to see from your window!

For me its difficult to say if its too sharp, or if the apparent sharpness is just due to strong harsh light and high contrast, - which is essentially the same thing as sharpening!


I would think, seeing as the Sun was shining on the rack face, that it would look a little warmer, meaning the white balance overall. When I adjust this in my mod, it seems to slightly reduce the appearance of sharpness, as contrast is reduced.

I see you selected white balance manually, - can you tell us what you chose?

As above, scroll up to see modifications, and view large.



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26 Apr 2013 8:45AM
Thanks, hanehawi - interesting effect of changing colour balance, even if it does not quite match my memory of the almost surrealistic contrasts. On the other hand I don't remember the setting, as I probably just grabbed the camera at hand, just checking aperture- I normally leave the WB on daylight as I rarely used this camera indoors so far.
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
26 Apr 2013 2:14PM
Scene memories are not very reliable, as what you see it what your brain wanted the scene to look like. The camera, being dumb, just sees whats there, and applies your settings. The measured white balance is quite a bit cooler than daylight, being biased towards the blue.

Thanks for getting back, appreciate it.


Regards


Willie

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