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taken as red[a bike and a bridge]

By youmightlikethis
glasgow street scene with little splashes of red within the scene

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Comments


Davesumner 15 28 300 Australia
21 Jul 2010 3:21PM
Ian,

Love this shot but I'm not at all keen on version 2. I like the symmentry of the scene and the position of the rider. The red on the bike is great and really adds to the image although the tower block spoils it overall slightly.

For me there two things that I would change. The image needs to be cropped to make it a true symmetrical image, bridge wise as you have stone tower in the left edge and you can get rid of the tower block. Also the lighting is very flat and needs some contrast.

Hope this helps

DaVeS
21 Jul 2010 6:14PM
thanks for crits and mods
paulbroad Plus
15 131 1294 United Kingdom
23 Jul 2010 8:37AM
Now this time I find the more un-natural V2 by far the best. The image is well composed, but V2 has a great deal more impact and strength.

The muted colours and lack of contrast in V1 make it look very heavy.

Paul

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