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Hebridean Beach

By Bellai
an attempt of a simple illustration of a windy day on a sheltered beach - any comments and advise is appreciated - Isabella

Tags: Landscape and travel Landscape and travel and beachand seaand wind

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3510 Canada
15 Feb 2011 11:16PM
A spectacular image Isabella and a beautiful place.


You exif data shows f/22 at 1/20 second, presumably at 18mm, so if this was not tripod mounted, or the camera on a solid base you were lucky to get it sharp. I understand why the small aperture, but using 18mm you may have got away with f/11 or f/14 allowing for a faster speed.

From the pov of composition, you are best to place the horizon on a third, and perhaps you struggled with this here as you feared losing the nice foreground rock. Moving further back and shooting from a lower pov would have helped.

It does benefit with adding some sky at the top to place the horizon on a third, and ive done this in a mod; also cropped space from the right and added space to the left to get the rock into a better position. I have slightly reduced contrast to lighten overall, and reduced saturation just a touch.




Hope this is helpful,



Regards



Willie

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Bellai 8 Scotland
16 Feb 2011 12:11AM
Hi Willie

very perceptive - I think this is a marked improvement - thank you very much

Regards

Isabella

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