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building the house

By Bernabedellamattia
When I stop on the road I saw into the grass, a group of people with the fournitures, vehicles, wood, etc in the middle of nowhere. Building their movil house for the season.

Tags: Photo journalism General Landscape and travel Portraits and people Mongolia rural landscape

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SueEley 12 279 96 Wales
5 Apr 2012 4:50PM
This is an interesting scene from a photojournalism point of view. You have included a lot of information. I think it would be stronger as a photo if you had focused on one part of the scene and had someone facing towards the camera (the child in pink would have been good), or at least a face in shot.

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paulbroad 10 123 1244 United Kingdom
5 Apr 2012 5:16PM
Interesting. i think there are quite a few images available here, but, if possible rather closer with more detail. That may not be possible of course but I find just a bit too much to look at here.

Ade_Osman 15 4.5k 36 England
5 Apr 2012 7:13PM
It's one of those what if shots.....What if I shot it this way or that, I think this particular image would benefit if converted to mono. It's easy for me to say this now, but I think had it been me I'd have tried to shoot it from a slighter higher and closer perspective.....

NDODS 7 5.1k 125 United Kingdom
5 Apr 2012 7:50PM
An image full of endless narration, just needs pushing in the right direction, in order that we can read the information before ours, without having to read between the lines or fill in the gaps.

Regards Nathan

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