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By bglimaye
On Sunday , while roaming in a fort, I got this chance to capture Sunlight over a Pillar . Please give your valuable suggestion against the snap

Tags: Landscape and travel

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NEWMANP 10 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
20 Dec 2011 12:47PM
what you have captured has been done well enough, exposed and composed fine and the shapes are interesting but i think another element is need to complete the image.

its a little like a stage set without an actor. if a figure was popping out from behind the column with something bright like a headscarf caught in the bright shaft of light then you have a winner.

how about looking for something in your files and photoshopping it into the image ?


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SueEley 11 279 96 Wales
20 Dec 2011 6:51PM
The sunny wall has good tones, but about half the image is black. Like Phil, I would like to see a figure perhaps, but also some detail in the rest of the wall... It is hard to get detail in dark areas without overexposing the sunny tones you wanted to keep, but maybe combining two or more shots might be the way to go? Or, with raw you might have been able to recover some detail.
paulbroad 10 123 1238 United Kingdom
21 Dec 2011 8:25AM
Possibly half a stop less exposure to increase detail in the stone but you do need something to add interest. The shapes are not enough on tere own. A figure also harshly lit?


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