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Ready for Action

By Bickeringbush
The lovely Aleisha dressed for action for Airsoft at Ardeer munitions factory which is now abandonded.

Tags: Model Light Sexy Beauty Gun Composite Abandonded Airsoft Portraits and people

Voters: Spkr51, pablophotographer, Jasper87 and 7 more

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pablophotographer 9 1.8k 405
20 Mar 2017 8:18PM
Nice camouflage Smile
chappo1 13 6 14 Australia
21 Mar 2017 1:59AM
After a couple of will I or won't I's and a look at your gallery, I will make some observations on how the scene affects me. They are not criticisms and I am unable to download the image to try the concepts but here goes-
Do the RHS and LHS add anything to the image? If they were not there would it still be a great image? For me a portrait crop would strengthen the image.
If you decide I am wrong on the crop, would toning down the yellow flowers accentuate her face?
Would opening up the shadow area inside the stone culvert add some extra third dimension?

My only real niggle is a couple of hot spots, particularly her left arm.

Aleisha has beautiful eyes and it would be great if you could get hr in the studio......john

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