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GrahamNobles 11 9 4 England
19 Oct 2008 11:22AM
Like this one even better, D seems to have relaxed a little more. Very lovely lady.

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lonely_oryx 12 61 55 England
19 Oct 2008 11:24AM
Better image. The expression is more relaxed
kaybee 15 6.8k 26 Scotland
19 Oct 2008 12:16PM
She looks nice and happy.

Two things I would suggest ........... I would desaturate the blue in the hue/saturation and also clone out the fold lines in the backdrop.

If you can - in future sessions - get more distance between your model and the backdrop and open the lens a couple of stops and pull the backdrop as tight as possible to get it as smooth as you can
sillygirl 11 9 Sweden
19 Oct 2008 12:18PM
What a nice realaxed pose, youre doing good. Smile
ringyneck 13 315 18 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 1:19PM
I prefer the pose of the !st one.Together with the expression of this one and it would be a real winner.
On this one I don't like the pose as it's un-flattering and the right side keeps pulling the eye over there.

oneill 11 155 Ireland
20 Oct 2008 1:03PM
so you both should,,beautiful images,,,
ginz04 15 281 20 United Kingdom
22 Oct 2008 5:13PM
hi = i like the pose but would crop to get rid of legs because they are in foreground pointing towards camera it makes them look big - would suggest you need to iron the back drop better to get rid of creases.

Dont know if you have many lights because if shooting a white bg - you need to get 2 lights firing on bg 3 stops more than forefround to make it go white. Also you need to get your model as far from back drop as possible but at least 6 - 8 feet.


mikesavage 17 299 2 England
22 Oct 2008 6:58PM
Another nice shot - I would have been tempted to point the camera down slightly though. Click!
sawdust 13 72
7 Nov 2008 3:05PM
Yes you are on the right track keep up the work rate.I see the wife is geting more confidant and it shows
All the best Alan
steveuk 10 United Kingdom
30 Dec 2008 4:57PM
Well I would agree with many of the comments here.

In this one she looks lot more confident, so I haop you will be taking more photos soon.

Couple of suggestions:
1. Let her look slightly at angle to the camera, that way she wont be too sub-concious
2. Background is too tame for such a beautiful lady
3. Earing rings look great, add some more jewellry
4. blouse with long sleeves let her down in the photo, short one next time, and needs to be flimsier

And finally good luck!
More relaxed pics in this image, but i have to say in your lovely wifes defense, its not easy modelling for a loved one.

I would invest in seamless paper backdrops if you have the space, they make for a cleaner picture, material always looks a bit messy.
Armakk 10 United Kingdom
2 Jul 2014 7:47PM
Great shot well done to you both... SmileSmileSmile

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