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sparrowhawk Plus
11 277 2 United Kingdom
13 Feb 2009 7:12PM
wonderful shot but i think your wife looks a bit uncomfortable. other than that it's a great shot

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I think its a nice soft image, however the white balance just don't look right for some reason.
The skin tone looks a little orange, however the exposure is not too bright.

DaveGu 12 1 1 England
13 Feb 2009 7:32PM
Agree with above about white balance but like the pose and overall feel of the shot. Well done.

miptog 14 3.6k 63 United Kingdom
13 Feb 2009 8:08PM
Like the pose. It would be interesting to see how the pose looks if the model stayed in the same position and you took the shot from an lower and higher angles.
alfieB 13 1 United Kingdom
13 Feb 2009 8:42PM
Well done to you and your wife, she's a very attractive lady and looks as though she is gaining more confidence.

I like the pose, composition and lighting.

Not sure about the comments re white balance cos on my monitor it looks OK. But then is my monitor set up correctly ???

Best wishes to you both

kaybee 15 6.8k 26 Scotland
13 Feb 2009 8:55PM
Good on the two of you.
It is pretty simple but works for me.
steveuk 10 United Kingdom
13 Feb 2009 11:53PM
wow......what a fantastic photo, right proportions and an excellent and sexy model. Looking at all your photos so far, she looks more relaxed and hence the poses are so erotic without revealing too much...
GrahamNobles 11 9 4 England
14 Feb 2009 6:58AM
This one works well. A very relaxed expression which draws you in.
harrattp 12 11 4 England
14 Feb 2009 10:05AM

Quote:Well done to you and your wife, she's a very attractive lady and looks as though she is gaining more confidence. alfieB

Have to agree with Alfie. A very very lucky chap to have your wife also be your model. Tell her we all look forward to seeing her grow even more in confidence as your sessions progress.

sawdust 13 72
15 Feb 2009 11:37AM
They keep geting better love the lighting keep up the good work
oneill 11 155 Ireland
15 Feb 2009 2:50PM
a fantastic image,,well done,,,
costas Plus
12 2 2 Greece
15 Feb 2009 8:26PM
Good shot, well composed
Malvern 16 United Kingdom
16 Feb 2009 9:11AM
Excellent technique - considering you call yourselves 'beginners!' I'm not sure if the lady intended to flaunt with the camera but the obvious juxtoposition of her thighs worked for me!
Fantastically artistic, with an almost completely natural sensual appeal. I look forward to more of your work and applaud your wife's interest in your 'hobby'
Wellspring 11 86 37 England
16 May 2009 9:49AM
A really good composition that works well for me. I like the lines, curves and colours.

Things to think about are having a smoother surface more evenly lit, losing the bra straps which can distract from the smooth lines etc, having a darker background and lighting in different ways, different expressions - eyes closed, looking down etc.

I like the picture as it is, it is warm, friendly, interesting and engaging.

Keep up the good work

GeorgeMSmith 10 4 6 United States
2 Aug 2009 9:58PM
Very nice image, looks like you two are having fun and enjoying the genre. I like the expression and the pose. The diagonal lines formed by the arms enhances the composition. Crop is spot on.

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