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Golf swing

By bigbob2
Grandaughter treated dad to a round of golf for father's day but he had to pay for breakfast

Tags: Sports and action

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6 Jul 2009 8:08PM
Nice shot, would have lost the caddy handles though.

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chensuriashi Plus
14 321 18 England
6 Jul 2009 9:25PM
Nothing wrong with the golf shot at least her eye is on the ball...not a bad attempt, but lots of wasted space in the FG, I love the action of the swing caught just bang on, but the subject could have been larger in the frame, so you should have got closer to catch it all...just a step or two would have given the shot more punch in the action...Chen.
Paintman Plus
13 1.4k 177 United Kingdom
6 Jul 2009 9:56PM
First of all I think the photo is on the lean and in the mod I straightened it out a bit using the tree trunks as verticals. It looks like she was hitting up hill so I didn't make it completely horizontal.

There are a lot of distractions in the frame, shadows, caddy, cone and the small board by the tree. I cloned all these out so the subject could be seen on her own.

I changed the colour balance as I thought your original looked too green.

Cropping the f/g got rid of the wasted space that doesn't add anything to the image.

Finally sharpened and saved to web.

This is only an opinion and not meant to offend.

Alan.

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