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Black Pagoda in Rain

By biswajitpattanaik
Black Pagoda in Rain

Tags: Architecture

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bayleaf 14 8 United Kingdom
10 Aug 2009 7:58PM
A lovely shot
John
NEWMANP 13 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
10 Aug 2009 10:46PM
hi,
a lot to like here, particularly the bright umberellas in the rain and all those reflections. the temple is almost a secondary thing and not the main subject. i like the whole composition and with a bit of care could have been a show stopper.

the sky was so bright and thin in colour that it has burned out and lost detail. the temple has also become a little soft and lacking in definition. using a soft egde 3 stop grad nd would have held this back enough to make a big difference. to show what i mean i have overlaid a grad onto your picture and given a little boost to the saturation. have also cropped a little from the right to make the temple less central and tighten up the composition.

best regards,
Phil
prabhusinha 14 5 5 India
11 Aug 2009 5:42AM
Mod is good,but hides peoples expression.

Quote:Hi,
a lot to like here, particularly the bright umberellas in the rain and all those reflections. the temple is almost a secondary thing and not the main subject. i like the whole composition and with a bit of care could have been a show stopper.

the sky was so bright and thin in colour that it has burned out and lost detail. the temple has also become a little soft and lacking in definition. using a soft egde 3 stop grad nd would have held this back enough to make a big difference. to show what i mean i have overlaid a grad onto your picture and given a little boost to the saturation. have also cropped a little from the right to make the temple less central and tighten up the composition.

best regards,
Phil



Hi
You have beautifully edited my picture. I liked it. Thank You.

With Regards
Biswajit

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