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What's that Mum?

By Bit_Blurry
One of those lucky candid shots that seemed to work quite nicely.
The background seems to have blown out a little but still one of my better efforts.

Tags: Portraits and people Whitstable beach

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banehawi Plus
18 2.8k 4331 Canada
10 Feb 2011 3:18PM
A really good candid and a nice one for the family album. The toming is very good catching that intimate moment.


I would crop that white space from the right, and add a little contrast, and sharpen where Moms hand is, - its mainly sharp closest to the camera, so a little sharpness where the action is helps.



Hope you like the mod, and find the feedback constructive.



regards



Willie
Bit_Blurry 12 79 United Kingdom
10 Feb 2011 7:58PM
That's very helpful, thank you.
Love the mod, it's such a glaringly obvious crop to make as well, when pointed out anyway Smile
Thank you for the comments too Smile
Grampy 13 507 71 England
11 Feb 2011 8:46AM
I agree with Willie about the crop but I would add that it would have been nice to turn the couple a little to see a bit more face and maybe a little lower angle with them moved a fraction further from the wall, as you say it is a candid shot but sometimes things need reorganising a bit before shooting to make an even better image or even an alternative after capturing the candid moment..
Phill

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