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autumn....

By Bogdan_Fiscutean
if u have any comments.. write it down..here, thanks

Tags: Black and white Portraits and people Girl leafs

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LynneJoyce Plus
8 20 99 United Kingdom
2 Oct 2008 5:38PM
Great idea but it seems a shame to lose the lovely Autumn colours. Couldn't you have left them in the leaves?

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The next photo it will be with colors.
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3492 Canada
2 Oct 2008 8:52PM
Its an interesting shot, - quite nice.

I would suggest a few things.

As it is, it needs to be sharpened quite a bit, - this needs to be done after you re size the image, just before you upload it.

Im not certain about the crop across the face, - its a personal thing, but maybe would look better with the entire face, - or the crop taking the face exactly down the middle?

As its an autumn theme, - it doesnt necessarily need to be coloured - but perhaps some autumn colour left in some of the leaves?

I personally dont like heavy black frames in portraits, - too reminiscent of funeral shots for me!

I have loaded 3 mods:

1 is with the basic image sharpened

2 is with the same image toned with a hint of autumn colour

3 is with a new frame

Hope this feedback is helpful,

regards


Willie

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