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conrad 13 10.9k 116
26 Oct 2008 8:24PM

Quote:Is this picture sending a message to you?

To be honest - no. But I do like how you have made her face the clear and very striking subject of the photo, with the city just a minor backdrop. What I don't like, but that may be just me, is how you cut off part of her mouth. A crop is fine and well, but I think it might have looked better if we had seen all of her mouth. And I think I might have been inclined to remove the spot on her cheek, which I find slightly distracting.

But I really do like the idea and mostly how you've done this. And let me just add that I think black and white was a very good choice for this kind of shot.

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