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katie & aine

By BrenS  
this image was croped and turned into black and white and the i added a sunburst. what would you do differently?

Tags: Black and white Digitally manipulated Portraits and people

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Davesumner 16 28 300 Australia
28 Nov 2007 12:13AM
What can I say, a really nice shot. Are the circles on the image from the light?
ade_mcfade 18 15.2k 216 England
28 Nov 2007 10:31AM
Shows a lot of potential - you've cut the girls out to get rid of distractions and also filled in the empty space with some interst in the lens flare filter.

the mono toning is soft and fairly flattering

All I'd suggest is a little more practice with the brush tool - try using it on a very low opacity so that it has minimal effect, you'll get smoother lines around the girls and that will give you a less jagged effect
BrenS 15 50 Ireland
28 Nov 2007 12:21PM
yeah the circles are from the light in sunburst. thanks you for the great advice ade_mcfade really appricate it.
Ridgeway 16 222 2 Ireland
28 Nov 2007 4:10PM
Nice one Brens,
1 Dec 2007 5:14AM
With all due respect, you overdid the "photoshop", or post-processing. The skintones of the girl on the right do not seem natural in comparison with the eyes. However, the exposure and contrast do seem very keen.

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