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BROKEN KEYS

By brian7d
this was taken in the caribbean, and just a grap shot , darkened the keys down a bit

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3 Nov 2013 11:19PM
Hits the right note with me, Brian!Smile

Richard

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mrswoolybill Plus
11 1.2k 1812 United Kingdom
4 Nov 2013 1:59PM
It's a beautiful subject, with a lot of potential. I think I would be looking at a stronger diagonal, but that's just how I see things. I wonder why you darkened the keys? To me this needs the contrast of the light falling on the white keys.
Moira
mrswoolybill Plus
11 1.2k 1812 United Kingdom
4 Nov 2013 4:54PM
I've uploaded a Mod, keeping to your original proportions but putting the keyboard on a stronger slant. This to my eye creates a more dynamic feel, and it fits the diagonals more or less between the top left and bottom right corners.
I lightened the white keys somewhat, but kept something of your dark, subdued atmosphere.
I suspect that the date setting on your camera may need changing!
Moira
paulbroad 10 123 1198 United Kingdom
5 Nov 2013 10:00AM
A grab shot at 1/10 sec? Must have a steady hand. Much too dark for me unless it was a filthy piano. The keys should be brightwith strong contrasting blacks, retaining detail in the whites. It just looks under exposed to me.

Sorry to not go with the others.

Paul

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