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By brian7d
this was taken at dusk just after the sun had gone down , i just liked the lights on the pies and that you could see the people

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paulbroad 10 123 1238 United Kingdom
18 Nov 2013 5:21PM
Yes, quite like this. Nice tonal range and soft pastel colours. The hand rail leads in very well.


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cats_123 Plus
14 4.8k 28 Northern Ireland
18 Nov 2013 5:31PM
Lovely soft light Smile
pamelajean Plus
12 1.1k 2007 United Kingdom
19 Nov 2013 8:41AM
The light is so subtle at this time of night, Brian, giving you a fair deal of light on the pier, but also the golden lights to lift the scene.
The railings have been used well as a lead-in to the Pavilion Theatre, and the under-pier structures are well defined against the still light water.
You have kept both vertical and horizontal lines good and straight.

I feel that the large out of focus foreground railing mars the image and that it would benefit from having it removed.
I'm not concerned about the placement of the horizon because there is so little of it showing, but I would like to see a bit more sky over the top of the theatre, as well as a touch more brightness and contrast.

I have shown these small alterations in my modification. I also cropped a bit off the right side in order to place a line of the railing in the bottom right corner.


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