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Neuadd res

By brrttpaul
Ok took this this evening, stunning scenery. putting it in for critique. Struggled with this TBH as it was a bit hazy and the sun was in and out of the clouds, and I didnt have my tripod. I did try the graduated filter in lightroom but the whole picture still seems hazy to me and lacks punch which is a shame, any critiques/advice most welcome

Tags: Landscape and travel Neuadd reservoir

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Sooty_1 6 1.5k 220 United Kingdom
2 May 2012 3:42PM
I think the mod is a little OTT, but nearly right. Toned down a little, the picture wouldn't lose the 'evening' feel it has, but would brighten up. Half way between the two would be good.

Nick
brrttpaul 5 223 United Kingdom
2 May 2012 5:54PM
I like the 2nd mod better, I knew I had it wrong in lightroom, I think the reflection looks brighter than the sky which I know I can remedy, as for the name well yes does look bad but Im a bit concearned as I put my photos on flicker could they be pinched from there?
brrttpaul 5 223 United Kingdom
3 May 2012 9:31AM
ddint know that but do now.
DRicherby 7 269 725 United Kingdom
4 May 2012 12:09AM
Something's wrong here: your reflected sky is much, much brighter than the real sky. Reflections from water are about a stop darker than the real thing.

The photo has come out looking flat because the light's poor. From the bright reflection, it looks like you're shooting towards what's left of the sun, which means that essentially everything in the frame is in shadow. To take best advantage of the low sun, it's usually best to shoot at right-angles to it so you catch the dramatic shadows. I think the photo also lacks a clear subject: no part of it seems any more important than any other part. For example, a well-placed building might make a sort of 'base' for the eye to explore from, or some sort of a lead-in might help guide the viewer through the scene. This article has some good pointers; searching the Techniques section of the site for " composition " gives plenty more.

Dave.
brrttpaul 5 223 United Kingdom
4 May 2012 6:29AM
yeah i agree with you about the reflection being brighter, i took it to far in LR. as for the building well there wernt one lol i was trying to get a sort of mirror image with the reflection just didnt work.

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