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By cattyal  
I bought some strawberries yesterday specifically for a still life pic but what I had planned hasn't come out as well as I'd like. I'll try again tomorrow but here's another iffy one for now Smile

I've already eaten some of them but there's enough left to try again!

Tags: Still life General Strawberry Fruit Digitally manipulated Topaz adjust Texture layer

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derekhansen Plus
8 210 24 United Kingdom
27 May 2013 6:47AM
Your lighting backgrounds and processing look superb and on the whole your arrangement/composition looks good. The only element that doesn't work for me is the fork. Somehow the angle interrupts the flow.

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cattyal Plus
11 7.8k 6 England
27 May 2013 8:58AM
Thanks folks Smile

Happily the light at the moment is just right to do the pics just from window light and a bit of modification with my trusty sheet of foamboard. I just couldn't really crack the composition of any of my attempts yesterday - I'll try again later Smile
kaybee 12 4.9k 25 Scotland
27 May 2013 9:14AM
Where's the cream?
cattyal Plus
11 7.8k 6 England
27 May 2013 9:24AM

Quote:Where's the cream?

I don't like cream Smile
Joline Plus
10 27 53 United States
27 May 2013 11:42AM
I like the arrangement overall, but it is a bit too dark....just a teensy bit more light would work wonders. I would also like to see it without the fork.
Alda Plus
3 70 30 United Kingdom
27 May 2013 1:47PM
I kinda like the fork GrinGrin
cattyal Plus
11 7.8k 6 England
27 May 2013 3:32PM
Thanks folks and thanks Alda for the mod - yep, mine is definitely too dark Smile
Irishkate Plus
6 38 100 United Kingdom
27 May 2013 4:18PM
On the whole a very pleasing composition
but I know how hard it is to get what is in your head!
The brighter mod is lovely but I kind of liked the very controlled darker version too.

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