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weston sunset

By Chaska
sunset in weston super mare

Tags: Landscape and travel

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
6 Mar 2010 12:18AM
Its not a bad shot, - colours are very nice.

Try to compose so that the horizon in not in the centre, - aboiut 1/3 up from the bottom, or down from the top depending on if you want more sky or more foreground.


Ive loaded a mod with the morizon closer to a third, nit quite there, added a little contrast and noise reduction.


Hope you find this helpful,



Regards



Willie

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sdb 9 111 United Kingdom
6 Mar 2010 7:04AM
I agree with the above comments - exposure has been handled well but the composition is too "central".
paulbroad 9 117 1077 United Kingdom
6 Mar 2010 5:52PM
You have been heavily influenced by the dramatic sunset and not thought about composition. Ideally the sun itself needs to be on the left top third, then the sky darkened just a little. You then have something rather better which would be superb with the sun left where it is and a silhouetted figure on the left third top.

Paul

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