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By christinecilia
tookthis with my sony a 55 and my minolta 75-300 af zoom lens last week at slimbridge i have not used it much and am trying to get used to it .

Tags: Wildlife and nature

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banehawi Plus
17 2.5k 4255 Canada
5 Feb 2012 6:57PM
Its a nice shot Christine. I know your getting used to the kit, but this looks like you dont have too far to go.

Looking at your settings, - Aperture priority is the right way to go, though I would stop down the lens at least one stop below the max aperture. there is usually a very significant improvement in the lens ability to resolve detail stopped won even one stop.

Being a little picky, the gull is not straight, - I know is shot at an angle, so Im not using the rail hes standing on, but the legs, - they should be vertical.

The exposure is good overall, - just a little toning down of the highlights brings back some detail in the white areas.


Ive loaded a mod with a crop, straighten, recover a little white detail, and enhanced that small eye catch light.


Regards


Willie
STEVELIN 13 162 3 Ireland
5 Feb 2012 9:41PM
hi cristine
as willie said its a bit over exposed on the whites iv uploaded a mod gave it a bit of a crop and a adjustment in shadow highlights and added a bit of contrast.
the overall composition of your shot was good, just a bit blown out on the whites nice focus on the beak and the eye where it matters when it comes to bird photography the main points of focus nice catch light too.
steve
hi thankyou very much for your comments i will try this next time i see whot you mean christine Sad

Quote:Hi thankyou very much for your comments i will try this next time i see whot you mean christine Smile

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