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Daisymaye Plus
12 23 19 Canada
28 Jun 2010 2:48PM
She is stunning alright. Lovely portrait, her lipstick seems to fight with the red b/g though. I'm probably just picky.........Sandy
tmann 16 4 2 United States
28 Jun 2010 3:23PM
stunning pose and capture!
Stunning! Smile
ChrisV 14 2.3k 26 United Kingdom
28 Jun 2010 4:32PM
I'm afraid you've over-egged the retouching by a fair degree. You've taken just about all texture from her face with what looks like a quick gaussian blur. This is made to look all the more unnatural in contrast with the fair degree of detail in her shoulders [which look OK]. You've also over-sharpened the eyes and lightened the whites to such an extent that all detail is gone and you're left with an effect that whilst attention-grabbing, is unphotographic and unreal.

Very pretty model and it looks as though it was a fairly good capture. I'm afraid you haven't improved it... sorry.
28 Jun 2010 4:34PM
Nice Pic
chubs 13 7 England
28 Jun 2010 5:05PM
Thanks for the comments, ChrisV especially I joined the site to get honest feedback and advice, I'll have another look at what I've done, cheers.
User_Removed 11 299 4 France
28 Jun 2010 5:43PM
I agree with ChrisV for the most part but a tight crop to the face and part of the hair with further softening may well provide a sucessful painterley image ......stuart
28 Jun 2010 10:36PM
Excellent work,.very well done Chris.

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