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By Coltsfoot  
Sheffield winter gardens

Tags: Architecture Sheffield winter gardens

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ade_mcfade 17 15.2k 216 England
12 Feb 2007 8:57PM
it's a very good attempt at a creative shot - but I think my very first impression is "what am I supposed to be looking at"

you've caught so much in this shot - 3 balls, the reflection on the main one, the arch of the shopping centre - they are all competeing for my attention.

what I'd prefer is one of them to be obvioulsy dominant - the one you intended us to look at first.

nice to see an experimental shot and get back there cause there's potential here
accystan 16 132 6 Canada
12 Feb 2007 9:15PM
I think this is a pretty decent shot. I think I'd (as per the previous comment) make one of the balls more dominant. And I'd also clone the reflection of yourself - just to add some curiosity value. It might need rotating too. Great place for a shoot. Would be an intersting site for night (evening actually) shots.

Well done.

Dave D
block119er 17 8
12 Feb 2007 10:35PM
Maybe a different angle is required, think the Novotel hotel on the right is distracting. The arch of the Winter Gardens (not a Shopping Centre ade_mcfade, I'm a proud Sheffielder so just have to correct people Smile ) should be the main focus or the fountains not both as ade_mcfade says. Maybe the night shot would be better, think like everything else we photograph, you're looking for that little difference. Just my opinion though.

Tony
ade_mcfade 17 15.2k 216 England
12 Feb 2007 11:04PM
I'm a proud Sheffielder

so there is one after all Smile

a night shot and one with wet pavement would be really good actually
delboy1145 Plus
13 30 10 England
14 Feb 2008 9:58AM
Sorry it doesn't work for me. Its to busy and the building back left has no side elevation it looks like a film front. spheres are really hard to shoot without getting yourself in the reflection. May be go for the reflection as the focal point would give a good distorsion.
Sorry for the negativity but it is just my opinon.

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