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FishEye & Art 5: Ceiling (Re-post)

By conrad  
Strange, maybe, to re-post an image that was awarded an HC, but I couldnt stop thinking that maybe there were still ways to improve the shot. After all, an HC means it's nice but not perfect, right?!

The black frame in the original upload was something I liked myself, but I wondered if for some it might have been a little o.t.t. There was, after all, quite a lot of black. So heres a version without, and with a few other tweaks.

Now, question is, of course: Which version do you prefer, and why?

I'd really appreciate your comments!
Mods welcome, too.

Thanks for looking!

Conrad

P.S. Ignore the typo in the camera description...

Tags: Ceiling Art Fisheye Museum Architecture Germany

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Comments


hebdens 10 5
20 Oct 2005 12:39AM
Great shot,looks perfect imo.

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junglecat 12 12
20 Oct 2005 12:48AM
I missed the other one, so I'm glad you've reposted. Great abstract.
Coleslaw 11 13.4k 28 Wales
20 Oct 2005 12:49AM
Not sure which one I like, but in the previous one, the frame did contribute to the shape and geometry. This one is just nicely framed....if you know what I mean.

Cole
conrad 12 10.9k 116
20 Oct 2005 12:55AM
Thanks, all!

Cole, yes, I know exactly what you mean. Thanks for trying to explain!

Conrad
acbeat 11 14 United Kingdom
20 Oct 2005 1:14AM
good abstract in this shot nice lines.andy b
conrad 12 10.9k 116
20 Oct 2005 1:55AM
Thanks, Pete. So it wasn't the black, was it...
Wink
Conrad
csurry 14 9.2k 92
20 Oct 2005 2:10AM
Been waiting for these to reappear Conrad, definitely some of your best work!
conrad 12 10.9k 116
20 Oct 2005 2:12AM
Thanks, Cheryl - but which one do you prefer, and why???

Conrad
mellyleth 12 212 United Kingdom
20 Oct 2005 2:22AM
Nice one Conrad - this is excellent. I see it got you another HC! I love both, but I think I prefer the other one at a push, due to the way you presented it, and the angle etc. I think I also preferred the black border. Tough call though Smile
conrad 12 10.9k 116
20 Oct 2005 2:40AM
Ah, thanks, Mel - that's what I wanted to know! I think I prefer the first one myself, too, but it was the "not perfect" thought that I couldn't shake which made me do a re-post. Thanks for giving your detailed opinion!

Conrad
starliz 12 1.6k 3 England
20 Oct 2005 2:51AM
prefer this one if I had to choose....for some reason the lines seem more defined and the whole image has a much brighter cleaner appearance a much stronger image just my opinion though,like it.
conrad 12 10.9k 116
20 Oct 2005 3:01AM
Interesting, Elizabeth, how opinions always differ. Well, at least that justifies me in my reasons for uploading this version. Thanks!

Conrad
iansamuel 12 271 United Kingdom
20 Oct 2005 3:24AM
really like this, prefer it to the other, its brighter i guess.

ian
thewaiter Plus
14 1.2k 9 England
20 Oct 2005 3:27AM
nice abstract.....
digicammad 13 22.0k 37 United Kingdom
20 Oct 2005 4:16AM
Love the geometry and starkness in this Conrad. Maybe you could try for more of a diagonal composition?

Ian
mwatkins9801 12 190
20 Oct 2005 6:24AM
i like this one better- it just works better without the heavy black. you have some excellent work in your portfolio, it will happen. you often find what you are seeking when you stop looking for it. :o)
conrad 12 10.9k 116
20 Oct 2005 6:29AM
Thanks, everyone - it's good to have your input!

Conrad
nanpantanman 12 24 1 England
20 Oct 2005 10:03AM
I knew this was yours. It certainly has your style. Excellent clean stylish image. Kevin.
conrad 12 10.9k 116
20 Oct 2005 11:56AM
Thanks, Kevin!

Conrad
csurry 14 9.2k 92
21 Oct 2005 12:47AM
For me this one, seems cleaner, probably just the use of the black to offset the other. Have you tried the offset in white?
akh Plus
12 1.2k 5 United Kingdom
21 Oct 2005 1:32AM
Having seen both I think I prefer this one as the black in the previous version seemed a touch too heavy whereas the border on this seems more part of the picture. Well done on 2 HCs from one shot.
Tony
conrad 12 10.9k 116
21 Oct 2005 2:37AM
Thanks, Tony.

Cheryl - I'll have a look at making the black white and see what that looks like. That's one I hadn't thought of yet. Thanks!

Conrad
PatrickSmith 11 1.2k 2 United States
21 Oct 2005 11:09AM
There is so little to look at, yet so much. Very good approach.
Patrick
conrad 12 10.9k 116
21 Oct 2005 11:57AM
Thanks, Patric, I appreciate your comment!

Conrad
21 Oct 2005 1:36PM
great image
very original shot
davidbailie 13 457 7 United Kingdom
22 Oct 2005 6:53AM
I'd rather not compare just say I really like it - the fisheye effect give it an unusual quality

Dave
mellyleth 12 212 United Kingdom
22 Oct 2005 8:43AM
As you know I think this is brilliant and it didn't really need modding, but you know how much I enjoy twiddling about with your pics!! Hope you like it Smile

By the way, I noticed that when I saved the larger pic to my computer it was a huge file - around 3000 pixels along the length..
conrad 12 10.9k 116
22 Oct 2005 11:13AM
Thanks, Ivana.

Dave - That's okay, comparing is not obligatory! Thanks for your comment.

Mel - I have no idea how a pic that I uploaded with a longest width of 1000 pix suddenly got 3000. That's more a question for Will, probably. Oh well, just think we got three times our e2 money's worth on this pic, then. Wink
It looks like there's something to be said for using black and white, and a wider white border. Although it does seem a bit more bland in b&w, but maybe that's just me. But thanks for the mod, it's nice to see how people play with images!

Conrad
mellyleth 12 212 United Kingdom
22 Oct 2005 2:02PM
Bland? Pah!!!

:o)
Mariusz 11 Poland
22 Oct 2005 11:47PM
as always perfectly
conrad 12 10.9k 116
23 Oct 2005 7:24AM
Mel, I did say "a bit"... Wink

Mariusz - thanks!

Conrad
Keelo 13 18 Australia
25 Oct 2005 2:37PM
Great shot Conrad, I like it a lot, congrats to you on the HC.
Elimare 11 12
26 Oct 2005 12:31PM
Interesting piece of architecture, I like the excellent composition. Great shot.
Elimare
conrad 12 10.9k 116
26 Oct 2005 11:42PM
Thanks, Mark and Elimare!

Conrad
pfheyes 12 254 1 United Kingdom
27 Oct 2005 11:59AM
A well deserved HC, Conrad. Congratulations!
I like the simplicity of the composition and the clean lines on this one.

Pete
jany 13 94 United Kingdom
27 Oct 2005 12:02PM
I prefer this one even though the other is still impressive, this one is much clearer and lighter, great abstract shot.
conrad 12 10.9k 116
27 Oct 2005 12:17PM
Thanks, Pete and Janine - it seems the light draws people more to this version than to the darker one. I think I prefer the other one myself, but not because of the black - because it tends to deceive the eye.
Thanks for your comments!

Conrad
bismah 12 45
29 Oct 2005 7:24AM
u got a very elegant portfolio Smile
conrad 12 10.9k 116
29 Oct 2005 9:17AM
Thank you, what a great compliment!

Conrad
rusmi 12 35 1 United Kingdom
7 Nov 2005 1:52AM
wonderful, very refreshing image
Tom
vparmar 11 7 United Kingdom
7 Nov 2005 3:57AM
excellent image well taken and congrats on HC

vinny
conrad 12 10.9k 116
7 Nov 2005 4:34AM
Thanks, Tony and Vinny!

Conrad
jan 1 12 12 Netherlands
2 Dec 2005 1:32AM
Hello Conrad.
Your show case looks great. Behind the obvious.
Good work.
Jan
conrad 12 10.9k 116
2 Dec 2005 2:02AM
Thanks, Jan - I like it, too! Wink

C.
corkonian 12 1 Ireland
3 Jan 2006 2:46PM
Very, very impressive portfolio. Really nice work. I love the clean and crispness of your style.

*click*
conrad 12 10.9k 116
3 Jan 2006 10:59PM
Thanks, Eoin, what a nice compliment!

Conrad

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