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saltireblue Plus
11 11.9k 75 Norway
17 Apr 2021 6:34PM
Like the minimalism in this. No props, just a model, simple background, thoughtful look to her pose, finger on cheek, gets us wondering what she is thinking about or trying to recall.
Have a GEA.Smile
Buffalo_Tom Plus
14 2.3k 18 Wales
17 Apr 2021 6:55PM
I do like the pose and model but to me there is to much empty space to the left. The empty space draws me away from the subject. Maybe better in a square format to focus fully on the model. Tom
Buffalo_Tom Plus
14 2.3k 18 Wales
18 Apr 2021 10:14AM
I have been having another look at this. To make the Space work the lady needs to be looking in to it and to be moved further away from the edge. In my opinion something needs to be added in that space to make the picture work fully. As it is for me it doesn't work. Hope you don't mind me saying.
18 Apr 2021 9:56PM

We read naturally from left to right... so the negative space, devoid of any distracting element, leads the eye to your subject, focusing every ounce of the attention and leaving us nowhere else to go.
There's a silent drama, and a tension in the way you've divided the space.

And there are those cheekbones...
FabioKeiner 8 111 1 Austria
19 Apr 2021 8:57AM
4 May 2021 6:00PM
Very good use of negative space!
You have some very lovely work in your portfolio! Grin

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