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Different generations...

By NDODS    
An image open to debate. Please feel free to admire, challenge, discuss, or ridicule as you please.

Thank you for all you open and honest comments following yesterdays upload. I was under the impression that the image composed of three components, but hey ho that is bye the bye.

I hope that you all have a great day, I am still not firing on all cylinders but working on 3 is better than 2.

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin

Tags: General Line Pegs Tea Bags

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andylea 7 37 1 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 7:45AM
very clever well thought out idea nathan i like this a lot nice one Wink
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paulbroad 9 114 1049 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 7:47AM
Ridicule, Me! The thought of it.

A clever well thought out image, well composed and amusing. It just seems a touch flat. Perhaps just a brightness boost to add a bit of extra impact.

Paul
The ultimate misers' drying line.

Dougie
nonur Plus
7 17 10 Turkey
18 Apr 2013 7:48AM
Cleverly done and well done as is usually the case with you, Nathan. Made me smile.
Hermanus 4 4 South Africa
18 Apr 2013 8:16AM
I definitely belong to the generation on the right Smile Have never been in hot water - I wish Smile A great photo Nathan !!
18 Apr 2013 8:22AM
I know what Paul means about a little flat - perhaps reflections. But that would alter YOUR image too much. Interesting concept and I do like your colourful pegs.
CarolG Plus
9 195 18 Greece
18 Apr 2013 8:27AM
Remind me not to accept a cup of tea at your home, Nathan, I would dread to have the cup made over and over again with the red pegged teabag Wink Carol
morpheus1955 9 3 2 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 8:38AM
Brilliant shot Nathan, very well done

Hugh
fentiger Plus
15 916 23 England
18 Apr 2013 8:42AM
Was the red one found at an Archaeological dig? Wink Still life photography with humour ~ great stuff Nathan.

Albert
PaulLiley 7 2 13 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 8:47AM
Nice work. Well thought thro. paul
Bravdo Plus
8 17 2 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 8:49AM
Its not about ridicule but constructive comments Nathan..For me it needs a sense of direction, (yes i know its not a moving object), by giving a little depth maybe a slightly different POV, just a little to much open space at the bottem of the image. Again its a little flat and reflection could help in this one. Please take this as constructive and not a put down. The concept is good.

Barry
Rogerex 10 32 12 Australia
18 Apr 2013 8:50AM
A thought-provoking image which is open to various interpretations, even with my limited imagination.
Roger
wenzu78 4 7 Malta
18 Apr 2013 8:51AM
Lovely Nathan,

Nice shot.


Cheers.


wenzu
18 Apr 2013 8:51AM
Three old bags together.....javascript:;............GrinGrinGrin
SlowSong Plus
8 6.3k 29 England
18 Apr 2013 8:52AM
What a great idea - yet again your imagination is coming to the fore.
x
Nikonuser1 Plus
4 56 14 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 9:01AM
A well thought out image Nathan, had to smile, I think there is one more cup left in the first tea bagSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile


Cliff
cats_123 Plus
12 4.6k 26 Northern Ireland
18 Apr 2013 9:05AM
I've found it easier just to leave the bag in the bottom of the cup.....just top up with hot water when required Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Like the thought process that has gone into this Smile
mrswoolybill Plus
9 950 1480 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 9:08AM
Witty! And very stylish, in an odd sort of way.
I agree with Paul that this needs a touch more brightness. Plus I'm seeing a light horizontal streak in the black. I'll try a quick Mod to deal with both issues.
Re the streaking in the black background - it's a good insurance policy to view an image like this with shadows lightened by 25%, that will throw up any problem areas!
Moira
widtink 4 406 2 Scotland
18 Apr 2013 9:17AM
Moira the streak is the washing line Grin Some folk lol , everything stops for tea Nathan Tongue (another good lesson Aunty Mo)

Rod
Gypsyman 5 662 England
18 Apr 2013 9:27AM
Yorkshire Tea, I hope. Eric. All my old tea bags are broken open over the flower beds.
18 Apr 2013 9:36AM
on my monitor I can see the streaks also Nathan perhaps the black was cloned in I find if I clone a patch if when I think it is ok I stand up and look down the front edge of my monitor and this tend to show up any blotchy parts ....now the image when did you see Rods washing line told ye they were tight up there


GrahamGrinGrinGrin
franken Plus
13 3.9k 4 Wales
18 Apr 2013 9:47AM
More brilliant and original work here Nathan.

ken
ali63 Plus
4 749 1 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 9:49AM
A well thought out image Nathan, I like it GrinGrin

Ali
ErictheViking 3 124 102 Scotland
18 Apr 2013 10:21AM
Hi Nathan, thought I'd join in with my comment and mod I agree the bottom of the frame has too much black for me so in my mod I've simply cropped to a more square format. To tackle the flatness I would have taken this at a slight angle and allowed the focus to soften as it travels along the line so to simulate this I added varying degrees of Gaussian blur to the middle and left tea bag to give a sense of depth as well as suggesting the tea bag use is fading away.

What do you think?

Erik
WhiteRose1 Plus
6 1.6k 148 England
18 Apr 2013 10:29AM
Having worked for Scarborough Corporation catering dept in a sea front cafe, I can relate to this!! Grin

I can't see any streaking on my monitor at normal resolution, but if I grossly lighten the shadows I can see light coloured areas and splodges in different places. Maybe slightly unfair because that's not how you would view it normally.

Dave
platzy 3 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 10:37AM
Nice bit of colourful abstract imagery and well thought out.
Irishkate Plus
6 38 98 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 11:06AM
"When I am old I will wear purple" - a great idea well executed Nathan - were the colours relevant
or simply as you pulled them out of the bag (pegbag that is!)?
Can't see the streak myself.
KateGrinGrinGrin
a nice little shoh,try the coffee the granules are harder to hang up.

billy
Herge88 Plus
9 40 4 England
18 Apr 2013 11:27AM
Wonderful thought process here Nathan, you certainly come up with ideas I would never think of, nice one.

Best Matt
18 Apr 2013 11:31AM
I think you've got this photography lark 'off to a tee', Nathan!Wink
It's a great image, well thought out in your inimitably creative way!Smile
Having read the comments and critiques, maybe brighten it a little then use the magic wand tool to select
the areas that, perhaps, should be black and then fill with black to enable even colouring. You may need
to reduce the tolerance to avoid other blackish areas being picked up by the magic wand.
Hope your firing on all four cylinders soon,
Regards,
Richard
EAS 7 1 13 Scotland
18 Apr 2013 11:59AM
Have really enjoyed the comments above as well as your image. You really do inspire with such a different take of what makes an interesting image! Oddly enough, recycled my tea bag this morning for a 2nd cuppa, the first time I've ever done this!

Ann
18 Apr 2013 12:08PM
Certainly provokes conversation Nathan - what about a steaming mug of hot water just below waiting for the maker to choose which bag to use?? Just a thoughtSmile
luckybry 6 3 Scotland
18 Apr 2013 12:11PM
like it Nathan
gwynn56 4 87 England
18 Apr 2013 12:32PM
drat seems you got evidence of tea bags on my line SmileSmile
18 Apr 2013 12:34PM
This is neither additive nor subtractive, may be nAd itive, A great idea altogether.
debu 6 India
18 Apr 2013 12:39PM
Excellent work.
debu
User_Removed 6 48 1 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 1:01PM
Nice one Nathan, i like it.
18 Apr 2013 1:05PM
Clever and creative, great work Nathan.

Jenny Smile
TrevBatWCC Plus
8 12 10 England
18 Apr 2013 1:29PM
I wouldn't have thought you one for hanging up used teabags to dry out and re-use...Wink
A great and amusing image though, Nathan! Grin
Trev Smile
18 Apr 2013 2:20PM
Very clever idea Nathan. Funny how things we've seen and done in life make us laugh when shown to the world. I've reused a teabag a few times myself. Well done too.........Sandy
TyChee Plus
11 275 1 United States
18 Apr 2013 2:40PM
I like the simplicity, colors and concept here. Well done.
Ty
Sue_R 10 11 6 Scotland
18 Apr 2013 3:11PM
Made me smile Smile The expression that comes to mind is "waste not, want not" and I'm probably showing my age by knowing that one Smile

Sue Smile
rontear Plus
13 8 7 England
18 Apr 2013 3:13PM
In times of hardship Wink Nathan.
Ron.
18 Apr 2013 3:24PM
You have wonderful and different ideas, Nathan, like thisone! Simple and fascinating!GrinGrinGrin Best regards from Finland! --- Jukka.
Richsr Plus
9 90 223 England
18 Apr 2013 3:46PM
Got some really good critique to work with here Nathan, over to you now
regards Richard
18 Apr 2013 3:51PM
Brilliant capture, Nathan !
George
ColleenA Plus
4 318 4 Australia
18 Apr 2013 3:53PM
A very clever image Nathan, made me smile, hope you're firing on all cylinders tomorrowGrinGrinGrin
xwang 7 55 8
18 Apr 2013 4:09PM
Very creative and imaginative..I don't think that I'll go to your shop to buy tea next timeGrin
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3498 Canada
18 Apr 2013 4:15PM
Its a creative idea Nathan. When I look closely at the pegs, they remind me of waiters, bowing with a hand on their middle, and one behind the back!

It is a little underexposed. And I also think about the peg colours, with the red being stop, dont use this, and see that perhaps a green and a yellow traffic light system could complement the idea?


In the mods, apart from exposure, Ive tried to get the other colours by using the hue slider on a layer, then masking off. Its works, but yellow is not quite there.

I would crop a little height off, and still maintain that drying on a line height which I think you need, simply to get a useable A4 aspect ratio.


There is some visible lighter area down lower, - perhaps some filling in with black not complete, - or deliberate, dont know, so in mod1 Ive used all black, and mod2, for no particular reason other than to try to use what you may have intended, I stuck in some old style wallpaper. Theres a fancy French term for this sort of thing Im sure.



Hope this is helpful,



regards



Willie
User_Removed 3 4 1 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 4:36PM
Need more than one peg to hang up the old 10 man ration pack T bags! they were big? Bob

Great image ?

Bob
jaktis Plus
12 84 Sweden
18 Apr 2013 5:16PM
An excellent creation

Peter
CaroleS Plus
6 421 3 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 5:53PM
A really 'entertaining' image Nathan!
Carole
Lillian Plus
7 21 17 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 6:46PM
Never seen so many helpful people here Nathan
great thinking from you., and good advice given I am sure
Lillian
danbrann Plus
12 620 17
18 Apr 2013 7:04PM
Super content Nathan.
LexEquine 10 19 United States
18 Apr 2013 7:18PM
Artistic & very Amusing color Digital Image rendering ~ Peter Wink
kel55 4 8 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 9:08PM
this is a great idea , a very unusual way of showing the passage of time and i like it , do agree with some of the other comments about the choice of colour on the pegs ,if i was in total control like you were with the pegs i would have went for the red, yellow and green ( colours of life ) would have suited this image , but hey the image is so different anything goes , well done Nathan
Phantom7 10 29 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 9:14PM
Plenty of tea drunk in this house I can verify that.And some very nice cake.

Hope all is well mucka.
netta1234 Plus
4 355 2 Wales
18 Apr 2013 10:03PM
A great one NathenSmile
NettaSmile
achieverswales 6 8 101 Wales
18 Apr 2013 10:23PM
Enough said Nathan, I like it.

Regards

Trev.
Fefe Plus
4 23 31 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 10:24PM
I couldnt resist a play with this Nathan, and wanted to do something a bit different to other mods so I have given it a bit of an arty feel, played with the colours a bit and highlights /shadows and then added a lighting effect which gave a metallic finish and finally added a bit of glowGrinGrin
Great image as always NathanSmile
Diane
JOKEN 7 3 10 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 10:34PM
Darjeeling, Assam, Orange Peko -- or just plain Sainsbury, they make a fine collection and another example of your fine imagines.Ken
Paree 11 616 3
18 Apr 2013 10:56PM

Quote:What a great idea - yet again your imagination is coming to the fore.
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paree
19 Apr 2013 3:47AM
Very interesting image, Nathan.

Deep
boov Plus
3 2 United Kingdom
19 Apr 2013 9:02AM
When I worked on the building (groundworks) my boss Harry was only given 1 teabag a day by his wife, morning brew, dinner and afternoon brew, this could be one of his...LOL excellent idea thinking out of the box...excellent
Chinga Plus
5 1 1 United Kingdom
19 Apr 2013 3:26PM
Very clever and artistic composition Nathan! Grin
IB
dudler Plus
13 438 841 England
19 Apr 2013 6:03PM
Nothing left to say, now that I've been offline for two days...

All been said!
SeveGarcia 3 10 United Kingdom
20 Apr 2013 7:27PM
So Creative, Love it

Andy
Glostopcat 10 255 2 England
28 Apr 2013 8:15PM
I know times are hard Nathan and the prices of food in our supermarkets are ridiculously high, but come on man! Recycling teabags bought form Poundland that is going a step too far!!!WinkGrinTongue
great idea,very nice

this might have been said but couldn't be bothered to read all the replies lol,i'd have tried and angle shot too and a bit more line at the left would give the angled shot a lead in.

when shooting stuff in my home studio like this i always shoot multiple angles,exposures and compositions as well as the original idea,that way i have all or most bases covered

Steve
gajewski Plus
12 10 9 United States
7 May 2013 10:24PM
Missed this one until now. Glad I saw it -- brought a smile to my face.
-=\Walter

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