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firefly

By pip01
I am interested in what people think of this as I will hopefully be submitting this for one of my projects.
The idea was to start off far away from the horse and then come in closer. This would be one of the one's later in that series.
I have cropped in quite a bit from the original, I have also changed the brightness and contrast slightly.

Tags: Close-up and macro Pets and captive animals

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Comments


photophantom 14 108 3 Philippines
5 Mar 2008 11:31AM
Almost an abstract form Laura. Artistically done.
Dennis
Carabosse Plus
19 42.9k 270 England
5 Mar 2008 1:00PM
Pretty good but a bit dark. I've uploaded a mod.
randomrubble 18 3.1k 12 United Kingdom
5 Mar 2008 1:19PM
It may benefit to take a look at the equus section on this guy's site...

Tim Flach
FredF 16 1 France
5 Mar 2008 1:27PM
Very well framed. May be you can crop the white top left corner.

Fred
ramshots 15 2 United Kingdom
5 Mar 2008 5:35PM
I like the blonde mane which looks a little like windswept huaman hair but agree with FredF about the top left corner, which is distracting for me. Trouble is, if you cropped all this out it wouldn't leave much mane and would alter the balance. Also, for the future, it would be nice if you could get the horse to look directly to camera. Good start, though and it will be interested to see others in the series.
kalseru Plus
15 3 9 England
5 Mar 2008 8:03PM
Unusual crop that works well. Maybe a bit of contrast and saturation would give it a bit more pop. Personally I would probably darken the top left corner as it is distracting as mentioned above.
Andy

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