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Water Lillies

By custardcream_supreme
Some water lillies in a botanic garden. Any advice is greatly appreciated, thanks

Tags: Flowers and plants Wildlife and nature

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pamelajean Plus
14 1.5k 2189 United Kingdom
3 Jun 2008 6:22PM
I think this is excellent. The light on the flowers is good, the detail is fine, and they are nicely isolated from the background simply because of that light. I would just suggest a crop either side, for better impact, maybe more on the right than on the left, so that they're not too central.
zarquon 13 47 55 England
4 Jun 2008 12:20AM
Very nicely seen image. I have to agree with pamelajean that a crop of this image is likely to be useful. I have provided a modification to give you some idea of the change in impact. I accept the point that central is often dull but in this case I have broken the 'rule' to show that diagonal lines are a very good compositional tool and their use frequently adds an air of dynamism to an image.

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