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Spiral Staircase

By fentiger    
Taken at the British Library in London using part of the architecture to frame the repeating shapes of a spiral staircase. An ISO of 1600 was used because of the low light conditions. Possibly the keyline used for framing is too intrusive.

Tags: Architecture Specialist and abstract

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saeidNL 13 3 Netherlands
8 Nov 2011 7:55AM
Great capture and work,very well done,
saeid
mrswoolybill Plus
16 3.5k 2563 United Kingdom
8 Nov 2011 9:15AM
Very neat composition.
Moira
barbarahirst 14 27 12 United Kingdom
8 Nov 2011 9:16AM
works well for me..
can read all sorts into it
EAS 13 1 13 Scotland
8 Nov 2011 9:32AM
This is superb! Love the comp, shapes and colours. Reminds me of some kind of Oriental caligraphy! Oh and I think the line makes for a perfect balance with the matching colour within the image.

Ann
SlowSong Plus
14 10.5k 30 England
8 Nov 2011 11:44AM
Excellent. Great shapes and lines. The keyline's fine and the perfect colour too. I've never been to the library - an oversight on my part. On my Visit List from now on.
Chris
gingerdelight 16 298 11 United Kingdom
8 Nov 2011 11:53AM
This really works well!
Carol
taggart Plus
18 47 15 United States
8 Nov 2011 12:53PM
Wonderful framing, a great peak thru to an unusual interior-- LIKE!
Daisymaye Plus
14 25 24 Canada
8 Nov 2011 1:24PM
Great framing, like looking through a porthole on a boat. I think I would have left out the outer orange thin frame like you mentioned............Sandy
mikbee 15 3 8 Scotland
8 Nov 2011 1:53PM
Don't think the framing is intrusive at all Albert.
Had it been thicker it might have been !!
Mick.
CaroleS Plus
12 442 3 United Kingdom
8 Nov 2011 5:09PM
Excellent image, love that framing. Carole
fentiger 21 920 24 England
8 Nov 2011 6:51PM
Many thanks for all your comments. Thank you also for the mod, I did look at a mono conversion but personally felt that it was better in colour.

Albert
Jestertheclown 14 8.7k 255 England
8 Nov 2011 9:10PM
Hi Albert,

The orange line is a bit intrusive and the image isn't placed centrally within it.
It's also placed very close, too close for me, to the edge of the image and it's never a good idea to use a frame that mimics the prevailing colour within the image.
Or to put it another way, personally, I'd get rid of it!

Hope this helps.

Bren.
pamelajean Plus
16 1.8k 2274 United Kingdom
8 Nov 2011 9:13PM
I don't have an opinion on the frame, Albert. I think you have cleverly produced a very interesting image here. What would put the icing on the cake for me would be someone walking on the stairs.
Pamela.
banehawi Plus
18 2.8k 4331 Canada
8 Nov 2011 9:19PM
I like this Albert, and I think your instinct with the stroke line is right. It should either go, or be a colour thats not a dominant colour from inside the frame. I think that I just repeated what Bren said, - never mind!



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pascalg Plus
15 37 1 France
9 Nov 2011 5:15PM
excellent pov;
nice & crispy shot

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