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PranavMishra 7 52 17 India
6 Mar 2015 4:36AM
wow.. lovely..

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TanyaH Plus
16 1.3k 395 United Kingdom
6 Mar 2015 12:54PM
I like the square crop, the way you've positioned the figure on the right side of the image, and the way she's looking up towards a light source.

You may not agree with me, but I think this would have been much more powerful without the shoulder in the shot. The whole image is beautifully lit, and the pose with the side-on face and the finger placed so delicately on the lips is enough in my eyes.

That shoulder almost looks like it doesn't belong to her ... I'm finding I'm spending too much time on it, my brain trying (unsuccessfully) to integrate it with the rest of the image, her pose, the position of her neck ... rather than fully appreciating the rest of the image, which is very good indeed.

The other tiny thing I find a little disconcerting is that closest eye - because the shadowing in the corner is very dense and goes across the iris area of the eye, it makes the white bit seem like that's all that's there. I don't know if that's just my perspective though?

Tanya
nonur Plus
10 18 13 Turkey
6 Mar 2015 8:19PM
Love it.

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