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Hi david, welcome to EPZ, I see you're more than just a photographer 
but about the photo..
i think you've handled the exposure well, and i can see what you're trying to do fitting the flag on the window frame into a diagonal perspective. however, I think the extraneous bits that put it into context - ie the bits of window frame - actually distract from it and give it an untidy look.
I've done a wee mod to crop in tighter to a more graphic comp., then darkened slightly, increased saturation, and sharpened a tiny bit. Also added a thin border to hold in the white edges
Hope you like some of it
Stick around here and enjoy, and look forward to seeing your influaence on the site
Stephen
but about the photo..i think you've handled the exposure well, and i can see what you're trying to do fitting the flag on the window frame into a diagonal perspective. however, I think the extraneous bits that put it into context - ie the bits of window frame - actually distract from it and give it an untidy look.
I've done a wee mod to crop in tighter to a more graphic comp., then darkened slightly, increased saturation, and sharpened a tiny bit. Also added a thin border to hold in the white edges
Hope you like some of it
Stick around here and enjoy, and look forward to seeing your influaence on the site
Stephen
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